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Author Name: Freedyoung 3 Comments
Date Added: September 08, 2004 16:09:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Uncomfortable Poem
dark dank hanging fog
tepid listless naivety
smothering claustrophobia
screaming silent prison
dead eyes suffocate
loss of self imminent
restless flippancy
emotionally impotent
Author's Notes:
words describing a relationship (in my case a marriage) with someone who is dead inside. thank God for forgiveness and second chances.
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Comment By: FreeKelli on November 4, 2004 11:37:36 AM Report
I too am thankful for second chances. Perfect title for this write. Like this very much.
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on September 12, 2004 04:20:33 PM Report
Wow! You aren't kidding! Sounds like a great place to be from. Perfect description of hell. Good work, Dori. ML
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 8, 2004 08:26:09 PM Report


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