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Author Name: Freetimespell 5 Comments
Date Added: September 11, 2004 17:09:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Mind

Another blank page staring back at me,
awakening the eye's of my creativity.
Infinite nothingness flows from the pen,
now it has started now it must end.



I am searching myself for answers untold,
I find a new doorway that wants to evolve.
Those darkest moments are all in my head,
I have eaten my fill of the world I am feed.



All of the silence now painting this page,
are all of my thoughts and inner rage.
The lunatics invaded my tranquil mind,
destroying the reasoning that they'd find.



So they left me to rebuild this fragile place,
and now I must conquer the message they gave.
My weakened mind shall never be wronged,
walking through doorways just whistling songs.



Author's Notes:
Coming to terms with madness... not mine but the planets :O)
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJennifer on September 22, 2004 07:13:46 PM Report
what a crazy world we live in!!! This is written with extreme talent... Every word is food for thought... another beauty to add to the collection!
Jen
Comment By: FreeCorina on September 13, 2004 07:41:43 AM Report
Beautiful. And it can be taken in many ways, because the mind is such a rich thematic. Beautifully shaped, meaningful and thought provoking.
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on September 12, 2004 03:48:24 PM Report
Great Write, thought provoking.
Cat
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 11, 2004 08:16:41 PM Report
Timespell: very nicely done.



Lady Dragonwyck
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 11, 2004 06:34:28 PM Report
'Those darkest moments are all in my head
i've eaten my fill of the world I am feed.' ...truly, you will be affected by what you fill your mind with and what you believe to be true. I've written a poem about how destructive thoughts can affect a person and make them a prisoner. (posted today) I feel the same message in this poem.

Rebuilding is often the only way...discarding worn out ideals and relacing them with new ones.

Deep write Paul. Nice work!

~Barbara~




 


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