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Author Name: FreeSerenity 6 Comments
Date Added: September 19, 2004 16:09:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Perfect World
Waking up with the sun,




Shining brightly though my window,




Birds singing their own beautiful songs.




Its such a wonderful day today.









Walking out of the door,




A fresh spring breeze flows




Softly through my hair.




Standing there, I gaze at this world.









Hills of dark green grass.




Tall trees reaching towards




The light blue sky filled with




White cotton candy like clouds.









What I wouldn't do to be able to




Spread my wings and sore




Up to those clouds and never




Needing to come back down.









On the way people pass me by.




With big smiles on their faces.




Everyone seems to be happy.




Why the sudden change?









Wondering as I walk by,




They wave at me kindly




Saying hello as if I were a




Close friend of theirs.









Everyones hearts are filled




With joy and love.




The world seems so warm,




Not dark and cold like it usually is.









What a wonderful sight this is.




I wish it would be like this each day.




Sadly, I have to wake up




To this nightmare called life.
Author's Notes:
It was all just a dream of what the world could be.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freebloodtear on May 8, 2005 01:05:59 AM Report
it felt as though i was in a daydream just reading this. great imagery.props.
~clare~
Comment By: FreeKaty on February 22, 2005 03:27:08 PM Report
too bad the world isnt really like that. Good job writing about it though!
~Katy~
Comment By: FreeAidan Jojhenson on October 27, 2004 07:17:16 PM Report
ooh lala.. I like this one . oh lalalalalal.. lol
my french teacher does that a lot..
~Aidan~
Comment By: FreeChristopher A Librizzi on September 21, 2004 01:18:18 AM Report
I agree the world should be like that. A very lovely poem.
Comment By: FreePixi on September 19, 2004 05:29:44 PM Report
This reminds me of my poem "Perfect Dream". Reality is like a nightmare most of the time, but sometimes it can also be like a dream. Great write.
~Pix
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 19, 2004 05:26:55 PM Report
It sounds delightful!

I've enjoyed this dream Cary. =))

~Barbara~




 


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