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Comment By: ConjugatingWizard on September 8, 2005 08:19:07 PM |
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I liked this alot I hope that you keep up this style u earned the award
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Comment By: joia on July 30, 2005 04:16:52 PM |
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The intro did its job, I was ready to turn the page and read on. Story telling is an art onto itself, and you have the talent. Will we hear "the rest of the story?" Great job so far, joia
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Comment By: RichardM on July 28, 2005 09:57:34 PM |
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Reading this chapter again, its just as great as last time! Congratulations Richard!!
Rich
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Comment By: Jeff on July 28, 2005 08:31:34 AM |
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Congratulations on being honored on a great write,
Jeff
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Comment By: LindaM on July 27, 2005 11:10:43 PM |
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Congratulations on winning the award for this
wonderful piece.
Linda
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Comment By: Cathy on July 26, 2005 09:54:23 PM |
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What an amaziing first attempt so very excellent loved it. Congratulations on your well deserved award Bravo to you
Cathy
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Comment By: Robert Neal on July 26, 2005 10:13:23 AM |
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I would say this is far more than an attempt, and if you are properly inspired it may grow beyond a short story and become a novel or more ... well done.
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Comment By: Samantha Firefly on July 26, 2005 07:00:49 AM |
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This is a very interesting beginning. Congratulations on your award.
Samantha.
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Comment By: Gay Johnson on July 25, 2005 08:31:46 PM |
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Oh babe, I'm so happy for you. I new this was your calling. Not poetry but writing.
I love you
Gentle Dove
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Comment By: Lady Literary on July 25, 2005 08:29:22 PM |
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and????? *lol*
Congrats on the award..
Lisa
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Comment By: Lady Literary on July 25, 2005 06:16:59 PM |
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and????? *lol*
Congrats on the award..
Lisa
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Comment By: The Bag Lady on July 25, 2005 03:31:11 PM |
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And, here you have captured an award with Zar~! Good for you, Richard~!
Margaret...the bag lady
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Comment By: RichardM on July 18, 2005 12:18:39 AM |
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This is the start of something really nice. A great beginning it is!
Rich
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Comment By: Leonard Wilson on September 29, 2004 02:41:15 PM |
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I think you have found you niche,Richard.This story is very well told, indeed.I really liked the tease,at the end..Gets the reader [me] interested in finding out more.Well written,Richard....REALLY!I don't believe in spreading honey on a dung pile. I really like this...len
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Comment By: The Bag Lady on September 23, 2004 02:14:26 PM |
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Very interesting write, Richard, and I am loving the name "Zar"...I see an action figure in the future~ I will now roll my cart to part two of your work~ Keep writing, my friend....
Margaret...the old bag lady, who saw a flash of Zar
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Comment By: Carrie on September 23, 2004 09:24:00 AM |
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I think this is a great 1st part, Richard. Please keep writing. Can't wait for part two.
Carrie
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Comment By: Gay Johnson on September 23, 2004 01:12:02 AM |
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Bravo Babe. This is awesome. See, I told you you could write.
love you Gentle Dove
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