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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 3 Comments
Date Added: September 28, 2004 06:09:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Letting Go
Standing on an emotional cliff, dreams hanging below



Feeling like Iíve lost all hope, my gripís starting to go



Holding on becoming a struggle, survival is now a fight



So little and yet so much to lose, when falling from this height







Nothings ever easy itís always got to be hard



Walking miles for an answer, to find youíve walked a yard







Losing steam in my engine, hearts pulling with all itís might



To find itself a happy ending and a solution to itís plight







Things become a gamble and fights become too real



When fighting with someone you care for



It doubles the pain you feel







But Lord I am a weak man and I canít find the way



To pull myself off of this cliff and be there to save the day







So now Iím getting closer my hands are failing fast



Iím going to fall down because I cannot lose my past







Some people think I should use my wings



That I should not fall from grace



But they only see the cyber me



They never see my face







The time is drawing close now



My hands begin to ache



My hand slips off the ledge



As the other begins to break







Situation crazy like the end of a show



Leaving viewers wondering



If Iíll end up letting go







Author's Notes:
The hardest choices in life are always the most important ones.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCherie on October 24, 2004 05:14:52 AM Report
hey, i really liked this poem, i added it to my favourites :)
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on September 29, 2004 04:08:04 PM Report
I admit I only see the cyber you and who you reveal yourself to be in what you write, but I am honoured to even have that much of you. What ever you decide, I'll do my best to support it. Great write as always
Love Anya
Comment By: FreeKate on September 28, 2004 07:25:13 AM Report
Excellent write! I know how that feels. Keep writing from the heart!




 


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