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Author Name: Freeamylou 3 Comments
Date Added: October 10, 2004 10:10:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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desperate for your love
I love you so much I need you to know
Please hear me out it has to be so
This feeling I get when Iím with you
Itís to hard to explain but I know that itís true
I feel so sad when weíre not together
I want to close my eyes and make everything better
I want you to see that my love for you
Is not just a crush or a summer fling to
Iíd do anything and everything to make you see
That I love you so much I wish youíd love me
I want to tell all of my dreams
I have of you that totally seem
So realistic you there with me
God do I wish that could really be
I saw you last night with that girl
It made me so mad burning like hell
I know you leaving me itíll tear me apart
And also give me a broken heart
Please let me feel your warm and tender kiss
One last time just leave me with this
It hurts me so that I canít even cry
I love you so much I guess this is goodbye.
Author's Notes:

ahh young love

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Comment By: FreeLubaina on September 14, 2006 02:58:33 AM Report

A lovely poem. Your writing is strong and clear.


Comment By: FreeCraig David Dawson on December 23, 2004 10:05:24 AM Report
Ahhhh young love..beautiful.
Comment By: FreeAndy on November 20, 2004 09:00:58 AM Report
Young love indeed! This is pretty good for being 15! Very nice write!


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