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Author Name: FreeLifeOrDeath 2 Comments
Date Added: October 16, 2004 12:10:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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finally happy
you say you love me. but is it really true? y wont you just f****** let me be. you think im happy you see me smiling but that is all you see you dont know im lieng you dont see my tears you dont see me holding the knife you dont know my fears you dont see me letting go of my life wat the f*** is going on? who the hell am i? y is everything so wrong? its all just a gowd damn lie. you dont see me holding the knife agaisnt the vain. you dont see the blood running from the knife soon ill be free of the pain. you dont see me slipping away from my life. you were never there for me. you made me feel like i was a nobody. you knew i wasnt happy. but you didnt care about me. and now its to late. as the blood leaves my body. i know it was my fate. and with that last though, i am finally happy.
Author's Notes:
ya i was really pissed off when i wrote this.....
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Comments:
Comment By: Freemaddie on October 26, 2004 10:05:52 AM Report
i like this one... i think its my favorite one of yours...i guess because i can relate to it. but anyways great write...keep it up!
your coolest most awesomest friend in the whole wide world...lol
maddy
Comment By: FreeCherie on October 22, 2004 09:40:03 PM Report
it conveys emotion and is well written




 


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