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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 10 Comments
Date Added: October 26, 2004 05:10:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Another Day
Waking up to the darkness itís another new day



Going to work in the cold, the rain is a main stay



Nothing but people rushing getting in my way



Their late for work again and itís a crap day







But I am walking; Iím not talking CD player on full play



Itís just easier for me to be having them out of my way



Because I am going crazy with the s**t that they all say



Canít understand why people want the world so grey







Could be fighting now instead of writing some more



At the point where I donít know what I am writing for







Maybe itís me but I canít see what the fighting is all about



Could just be people wanting some reason to just shout



Not feeling ill or feeling real just know that I need out







But the exit to this matrix for me just isnít coming



I hear the phone box ringing but my feet ainít running



I try so hard but itís all in vain, canít seem to ever stop the pain



But I roll myself on like some kind of human steam train



Itís like a disorder but thereís just no quit in my brain







The load Iím bearing keeps on wearing me to the ground



As I go under I start to wonder why thereís no sound







Choking on words and emotions I canít seem to spit out



When it comes to posting itís like I got a drought







But the situation is bad but no longer dire



As long as my strength is set to never expire



Author's Notes:
Slowly but surely still posting.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCherie on August 23, 2005 04:38:13 AM Report
i read this again tonight just for a read and its so good, i really like it and the emotion in it is so good cause it portrays what happens everyday so well. its a really cool poem.
Comment By: FreeLubaina on December 7, 2004 04:00:04 AM Report
This is fantastic...what a beautiful write...wow.
:)

warm regards.
Lubs
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on November 12, 2004 09:17:26 AM Report
Dear Nate-
Your ability to take the emotions of what happens to surround you at the moment is phenomenal-
Whether it is joy or despair you have a natural construction of thought into word that makes it easy for many to relate to-
Sometimes we have to see through the darkness to know what the light looks like-
Otherwise all would look the same-
Once again I am impressed with your talent-
Best Wishes to You~
Peace~
James
Comment By: FreeMikmaqShaman on November 1, 2004 11:36:19 PM Report
... when every bit of energy is spent just getting through the day and the day is perhaps six months long for every hour and the possibility of a welcome smile, or a loving hug are someone else's day... the event horizon of a black hole is calling and you're trying not to fall into the well. Heavy sigh, Poetic Soldier. Well said, and empathetically felt. Blessed Be. Mi'kmaq Shaman.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 29, 2004 03:27:26 AM Report
Another day, where,Nate?..I haven't kept track and your write doesn't explain anything...len
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 27, 2004 06:20:19 AM Report
WHAT A SAD POEM MY FRIEND??
SO SORRY??
ALWAYS ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on October 26, 2004 03:56:43 PM Report
The drought will end as all droughts do, and then for you the desert will bloom, as your sister here will smile and smell the flowers of your talent. Here already is a flower in the sand. Good work Nate.
Love Anya
Comment By: on October 26, 2004 01:38:07 PM Report
Dont worry, things will settle. Nice poem :).

Alexy
Comment By: FreeManders.... on October 26, 2004 07:08:52 AM Report
I really liked it. It's pretty good. Great job onece again. :)

Jilbe
Comment By: FreeCherie on October 26, 2004 05:58:14 AM Report
this is such a cool poem, its going in my favourites :)




 


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