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Author Name: FreeBabyBluXTC 36 Comments
Date Added: June 11, 2003 07:06:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Farewell to My Baby Girl

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As I stand here in the rain over your grave
I reminisce of the times we spent together and pray for better days
I ask myself why couldn't it be me and why did you have to die?
I spent three long years in solitude as I mourned and cried
Your tragic death had such a large impact on me
I guess I was just too ignorantly blind to let you go and set you free
Instead I dragged you into this life of mine
filled with violence,sorrow and never ending crime
I bought and stole you diamonds,rubies and pearls
so that I could please and satisfy my one and only baby girl
I gave you everything you ever would need
but yet you were so against the life that I lead
I couldn't quite figure out what was wrong with you
but after your death I finally figured out what I didn't do
You didn't want diamonds,money or a castle in the sky
all you wanted was me and my love and for that I just have to apologize
It was too late and I never got the chance to really show you how I truly feel
my heart and emotions were confused at the time and so they were just concealed
It's all my fault I shouldn't have left you alone that day
they threatened to kill me but instead they went for easier prey
They murdered you because of me
how much pain and suffering does have to exist in this cruel reality?
I remember holding you in my arms as you took your final breaths
you told me you love me for who I was and you had no regrets
You loved me for who I was and not because of what I had
you loved me so much that you were willing to put your life on the line
so you could be with me until the end of time
I think of all the times I wasted which I could have been spending it with you
I could have prevented all of this if I only knew
If I would have loved you and been with you from the very start
I wouldn't be standing here over your grave with my heart shattered and torn apart
It took three years after your tragic demise
so that I could finally find the courage and strength that lies deep inside
I love you so much and now I have to let you go
I just figured I stop by and tell you I'm truly sorry,
and that is something I just thought you should know
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeNicholas Ryan on May 23, 2007 03:22:40 PM Report
sorry about your lost. I know I would be the same way as you, If I lost my girl.I mean she is everything to me. But anyways, man sorry once again great job of letting your feelings out.

--Later

Nick

Comment By: FreeTiffany on October 8, 2006 04:33:06 PM Report
omg this almost made me cry this is very sweet and sad. wat is this about though ?did some one actually die? omg this is GREAT! I LOVE IT! GREAT WRITE! very good!
Comment By: FreeAngelic Light on December 4, 2005 06:17:33 PM Report
Wow!! amazing write yet so sad! I can't believe I missed reading your poems! Defidently won't make that mistake again...I'm truly sorry for your loss though...keep your head high
^-^ ~Angelic Light~
Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 5, 2005 02:42:29 PM Report
This poem made me cry over and over again! Its a beautiful piece. Great write!
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 30, 2005 11:41:08 PM Report
Tony, you are a incredibly talented young man...i can see you have a heart and soul. Being able to capture such a tragedy with such love and emotion is truly powerful. Great write. ~Cindy
Comment By: Freeamanda on September 20, 2005 06:37:33 PM Report
i feel you even more on this one because i can relate to it.i did loose my baby its hard to have one with this crazy world with all the gang bangin and drug fight...
Comment By: FreeCherie on October 8, 2004 06:06:57 AM Report
yeah
Comment By: FreeKris Eller on April 13, 2004 06:40:39 PM Report
I have chills, and i am in tears, That is a beautiful poem. Great write.
Boowhooo,sniff sniff.
*Kris*
Comment By: FreeNancy B Scott on March 28, 2004 10:22:42 AM Report
wow. I'm speechless, Nan
Comment By: FreeJessica on March 23, 2004 09:34:57 PM Report
ahhh, im in tears. This poem is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. Great presantation as well. Well done!!!!!!!
Comment By: FreeLisa on March 9, 2004 09:07:07 PM Report
Gosh...i am in tears. x
Comment By: FreeJoanna Davis on December 29, 2003 10:18:43 PM Report
beautiful....i loved it...keep writing baby...
love always,
Joanna Davis
aka
babycakes69
Comment By: FreeFAITH on December 14, 2003 06:51:25 PM Report
I am sorry for your loss!This is a great writing!I luv it alot!I have never read such a poem and if anybody becomes friends with you I believe that they are very lucky cuz you have such strong feelings for the one you luv and care about!! ~Nikki~aka ~Andrea~
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on December 13, 2003 11:29:08 PM Report
:( I am so sorry for your loss. This is such an emotional write. I lost an uncle a little over two years ago on Mother's Day and I was devistated. God will bring your hearts together again. *S* Cynthia
Comment By: Freedanielle on December 6, 2003 12:43:42 AM Report
i am a big fan of your work i speak on behalf of all those who read this poem, from all of us... "thankyou"
Comment By: Freecallie on November 29, 2003 03:35:47 AM Report
This is one of the greatest poem i ever read.You did a great job.
Comment By: FreeTim Paul on November 27, 2003 03:28:42 PM Report
wow.
Comment By: FreeMary F. Charest on November 25, 2003 05:28:34 PM Report
So hauntingly beautiful. A powerful, touching write.
Mary
Comment By: FreeMary F. Charest on November 25, 2003 05:28:19 PM Report
So hauntingly beautiful. A powerful, touching write.
Mary
Comment By: FreeMary F. Charest on November 25, 2003 05:28:15 PM Report
So hauntingly beautiful. A powerful, touching write.
Mary
Comment By: FreeKeri on November 24, 2003 09:52:29 AM Report
This is so beautiful and heartwrenching. This is a very touching poem. Sorry for your loss.
~Keri~
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on November 24, 2003 09:30:37 AM Report
Tony~
Congratulations on such a BEAUTIFUL
write on such a sorrowful topic~!
It is truly outstanding~!

Margaret, the Bag Lady....
Comment By: FreeGoths Are Hot on September 12, 2003 11:49:12 PM Report
:'( u should have warned me...that so sad, but its really good, now im scared to read the rest of ur poems...i hate crying:( its awesome tho! i love it


Mo
Comment By: on August 18, 2003 10:43:14 PM Report
Excellent, this is a very beatiful poem, I have never read better. I love this. I will forever be one of your many fans, This was so well written. Im left speechless. Beautiful
Comment By: on August 18, 2003 10:43:07 PM Report
Excellent, this is a very beatiful poem, I have never read better. I love this. I will forever be one of your many fans, This was so well written. Im left speechless. Beautiful
Comment By: FreeChristee on August 16, 2003 06:14:13 PM Report
I'm sorry you had to feel such pain.It must be hard, but I'm glad you had the strenght to share that. I t really made me cry, I couldn't bear to go through that and I hope you keep writing, you're very good.
Comment By: FreeSandra on August 11, 2003 05:15:02 PM Report
Hi Tony, We havn't met but I did feel your pain. Your writing made see the story,,,, I assume you are writing about your own experience, however I know in my writing many times I write of others. Either way, it is very sad and I am sorry for this loss. Wonderful poetry, creativity and most of all heartfelt. Great work!!
Comment By: FreeNatassajh on August 5, 2003 02:04:19 AM Report
hey all i can say is WOW!! This is a really sad but great poem. if that makes since. i also thought the music was nice.
Comment By: FreeJERRY WILSON on August 1, 2003 10:50:36 AM Report
sad but wonderful write.....
wbpoet
Comment By: FreeEsmeralda Rodriguez on June 24, 2003 06:12:40 PM Report
damn nevur would of known, this poem was tight I shead a tear 4 this gurl i didn't even know, Great Job. Hope she R.I.P, i'm truly sorry 4 your loss.::Muah:: *****
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on June 11, 2003 11:19:56 PM Report
A very sad write Tony. But beautifully written. Great job!
Comment By: FreeKarina on June 11, 2003 10:21:02 PM Report
omg i got a tear on this one! im so sorry for your loss! great poem u can really feel it! and again im so sorry!
Karina
Comment By: FreeVictoria on June 11, 2003 03:37:43 PM Report
This broke my heart. I cried silent tears for your loss. Excellent job. Your agony and suffering was well expressed. Let her fly in the heavens above, she now is your gaurdain, make her proud. The music you chose was perfection to the poem.
Comment By: Freerebecca c. grissom on June 11, 2003 01:57:32 PM Report
Tony, I am so proud of you my friend, You let her go, I had to let my daughter cheryl go to, It's beautiful on the other side, Your heart is so beautiful and so are you. God be with You always. This was so touching and Precious.....
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 11, 2003 01:52:46 PM Report
Too much sacrifice for the cause...too much loss...too sad!! To late for you two. This leaves me very, very sad. :(
Comment By: FreeAngela on June 11, 2003 09:44:12 AM Report
oh my gosh i am completely speechless is sooo sad but very well written...wow




 


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