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Author Name: Freebehind_blue_eyes 7 Comments
Date Added: November 24, 2004 01:11:42 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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hotel on the edge
You are fighting again


What else is new,


I live in a war zone


A hotel on the edge


There are no smiles


Laughter is not free


There is only the tension


That is becoming normal





I donít want it to become normal


This canít happen again


You have to see past him


See what you are ruining


For the sake of one


There is no joy anymore


There is no fun


Nothing happens lightly


There is a cold settling that I cannot shift





Can you not see what is happening


Or are you blinded by your chosen path


Can you see what your actions are costing


Or is this what actually happened in the past


Is this what happened one rainy night


When I never saw you for months


You went past in your car and I waved


But I had to do it in secret





You canít do this again


It canít happen now


Iíll give up if this happens


Because it will lead to events


To which I cannot


Even begin to handle


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Comments:
Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on October 8, 2005 09:33:40 AM Report
A very personal piece about relationships...very enlightening and farseeing, predicting the outcome of events that cannot be changed...It has a voice of its own and I liked it.
Comment By: FreeOnlyMomentsRemain on July 13, 2005 12:05:02 AM Report
nice write, i love the title, its really creative...thanks for the comment by the way
Comment By: FreeMichael Barnicle on April 13, 2005 07:17:08 AM Report
Wow, great. I love your writes. Your very talented. So easily these make great songs to. Keep on writing...and I'll keep on reading.
-Barnicle
Comment By: on January 16, 2005 05:59:35 AM Report
Written with inner passion and strength, so vivid and clear, visual screamed from your words, powerful poem awesome to read.
Comment By: FreeKaren Redd on December 1, 2004 04:25:21 AM Report
This poem shows intelligence for a young woman who will do just fine in life!! Very very good!! Karen
Comment By: FreeCarolina on November 29, 2004 12:45:23 AM Report
Cherie, im not sure what you are talking about in this poem though it is a good poem. But from what I see, I think you can handle pretty much anything. I think your a very strong happy and positive person. Try to hang in there because if you give up, its harder to become happy again.
Comment By: FreeSandy J Hradil on November 25, 2004 12:26:21 AM Report
This is so sad Cherie
I can so relate to this in ways that break my heart. Never let the normal happen.....for it will never be normal. No smiles, laughter is not free.........that breaks my heart.
I love your poem as I know words will become your freedom! Your expression in your writing tells me you are a very bright wonderful person who will one day be very free and HAPPY!
EXCELLENT!!!




 


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