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Author Name: Freeamylou 2 Comments
Date Added: November 26, 2004 11:11:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Deadly Dedication
Send in the troops
Itís time to shoot
Whoever gets in our way.
Letís kill until weíve won
Donít you put down that gun
But please try to have a nice day.
Young as can be
The president canít see
Heís murdering the youth of tomorrow.
Fight like your men
No time to comprehend
The impact of a soldierís sad sorrow.
Out on the field
With weapons and shields
And rockets exploding near base.
Stop and turn around
Bodies lying face down
Survival would be a disgrace.
Ready to push
Attack and ambush
Us, people have chosen to banish.
Mean but itís true
Their dying for you
So, a few thousand people just vanish.
I ask, Mr President
Are you proud of your accomplishment?
Killing people who are cherished.
This war you can end
Itís time to amend
And stop more souls being perished.
Author's Notes:
people can be so cruel.......
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Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on December 21, 2004 01:21:27 PM Report
Excellent write, can't agree with, but for me the loss of any life is hard to live with.
Comment By: FreeCraig David Dawson on November 27, 2004 09:51:36 AM Report
Brilliant...i am adding this to my faves.


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