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Author Name: FreeJessieBreeze 4 Comments
Date Added: December 14, 2004 00:12:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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You're So Mean
I run to the edge of the precipice
And look down into the ravine.
You push me from behind.
I never knew you were so mean.

As I tumble over and over and down,
I listen to the joy in your laugh.
Then out of the corner of my eye
I watch you run down the path.

Over and over, down and under
I fall forever into the pit.
When I think of ultimate evil,
You're the only one who will fit.

My body breaks into millions
Of pieces of broken bone.
You stare at my body and grin
Before you run away home.

I lie down here in the canyon,
Not alive, and yet, not dead.
For I'll always be a memory
In your crazy insane head.
Author's Notes:
Believe it or not this poem was wrote as a symbolic representation of my crazy relationship with my sister.
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Comment By: Freekelsie on August 18, 2005 10:44:27 PM Report
wow! thats so good! i love it!

Comment By: Freekelsie on August 18, 2005 10:43:56 PM Report
wow! thats so good! i love it!

Comment By: FreeKathleen Rau on March 14, 2005 05:34:44 PM Report
Comment By: FreeMeghan on December 15, 2004 09:31:12 AM Report
Crazy stuff, but nice write!


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