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Author Name: Freeamylou 4 Comments
Date Added: December 21, 2004 11:12:11 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Renouncing my faith in you
So you decided to take him away from me
And Iím demanding to know the reasons, why
Watch me loose all my beliefs in you
My love for you has now been denied

All that is left is my repel and disgust
His death I will seek and avenge
You will feel this pain, disposed by you
Soon you shall know my revenge

Can you see these wounds, youíve given me
Iím plagued by youíre actions, Iím cursed
Slowly dissolving, you canít stop my demise
How I wish the roles were reversed

This soul that remains itís dying in me
Its purpose is only to grieve
I can see where Iím going, hell Iíll call home
Trust me, Iím not that naÔve

Every night, as the sun falls asleep
I plan my course of devastation
An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth
My fury, fuels my retaliation

My thoughts may be seen as immoral and wrong
But to me there true and there justified
Iím affected by hate and repulsed by all
Especially the way in which you are glorified

So now IíVE decided to take away my faith
Youíre demands are empty, Iím afraid
Iíll watch you loose all your beliefs in me
For your love I have destroyed and betrayed!!!
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Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on December 21, 2004 01:25:15 PM Report
Truely hearfelt, I feel your pain down to your toes. Beautifully written. keep letting out the pain and heal with the memories.
Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on December 21, 2004 01:25:08 PM Report
Truely hearfelt, I feel your pain down to your toes. Beautifully written. keep letting out the pain and heal with the memories.
Comment By: FreeCraig David Dawson on December 21, 2004 12:32:49 PM Report
Im with whitney...keep writing girl!
Comment By: Freewhitney on December 21, 2004 12:18:23 PM Report
wow that was deep, did you write from your life? hun you definetly have alot of talent.... keep writing and iīll keep reading!!-whitney-truegirl-


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