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Author Name: Freetruegirl 2 Comments
Date Added: December 23, 2004 18:12:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Eternal damnation
You’ve left me all alone in this World You weren’t suppose to leave I need you here with me I wake up and you’re no longer by my side Your pillows empty for you have died You made a promise that you would never break But I guess believing you was my mistake Its been a while since you passed away But without you here I can not stay I have no one to talk to Remember I only used to talk to you As more and more time passes by I just want to die There’s nothing left here for me As your soul flies free I cared for you six months straight And now all I feel is hate Towards God, towards the world, and especially towards you For leaving me before your time was due The truth hits me…I can’t have you back And I feel my mind about to crack As I search for a way to be with you again My answer is that my life must end I take the gun and put it up to my head Not even knowing what lies ahead As I pull the trigger I see your face Those beautiful eyes that once made my heart race You were standing there with your arms open wide And my emotions I can not hide I reached for your hand but instead I fell Into damnation an eternal hell For when I killed myself I committed a sin And God will not take me in It´s not till now that I can now see clearly For my impatient ness we will be apart eternally
Author's Notes:
All he wanted was to be with her...but he did not know that he not the one to decide when his times due..God does things for a reason and he knows what to do when the time is right. So leave him to decide fate cause thats his job. -whitney-truegirl-
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on February 8, 2005 06:30:00 PM Report
Great write Whitney. To take your own life is the biggest sin of all in my books. Great story. *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on December 24, 2004 05:22:39 PM Report
taking your own life is a bigger sin,than you think,the japanese to it for honoring their lord,you are not japanese,so stick around for a while,again there are people here who are willing to help you any way that they can,joe




 


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