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Author Name: Freetruegirl 3 Comments
Date Added: December 24, 2004 17:12:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Broken dreams
To many people have messed with my head With all the insluts the have said "My coming into this world was a mistake" "Its my fault everyones life is an outbreak" By my own family Ive been disowned And now through life I walk alone My shadows the only one that walks beside me On this path, so dark and lonely Im on the edge of breaking down My soul is about to drown I wish someone would save me, but no ones there No one ever took the time to care Im stuck in this world with nothing left but broken dreams As I walk along this path of silent screams.
Author's Notes:
I know this was short but it had so much meaning to me....You probably didnt get the last sentence. what I meant by silent screams....is that it doesnt matter how loud I scream no one hears it so So it is almost the same as silent. I hope you liked it! any comments would be great thanks for reading! -whitney-truegirl-
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBrokenDreams on September 7, 2005 11:12:14 PM Report
No she shouldnt it's wonderful I got the last sentence too! [Feels Proud]

~*B.D*~
Comment By: FreePatti George on January 14, 2005 08:12:07 PM Report
yeaaah, sounds like the greenday sonf blvd. of broken dreams.... Maybe you should try changing it a bit

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on December 24, 2004 05:18:01 PM Report
i understood what you meant,you never should explain your writing,we either get it or we dont,this is good,stay strong and there are people here for you,joe




 


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