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Author Name: Freeamylou 5 Comments
Date Added: December 30, 2004 10:12:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
Emotions arise
My despise I wonít disguise
Iím falling from grace
Time gone I canít replace
Deadened from within
I begin to peel back skin
Scrape away the pain
No need for me to explain
Nothing to this place
A disgrace you can erase
A faulty piece is me
Without the money back guarantee
Iíll do you all a favour
Iím not a flavour you wanna savour
Iím easy to ignore
Itís no different from before
Watch me as I break
My life Iíll take itís no mistake
As I start to fade
I listen to the sweet serenade
Of the crying that I hear
Which appears to be sincere
Lower me to the ground
Where comfort can be found
I feel your love and care
But now I must prepare
I do believe I need to leave
For my reward I shall receive
And as I fly high
And reach for the sky
My hopes increase I let go and release
My reward is perfect I finally have peace!
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Comment By: FreeBrad on January 16, 2005 08:42:55 AM Report
Very well written and I do hope you are not heading for heaven soon. I believe you have a lot to give well you are here.
Comment By: FreeGlata on January 10, 2005 10:18:39 AM Report
Still, no matter how bad life seems, It is always something that the body will fight for. Human nature is to struggle to survive, no matter the circumstance. I know that with loved ones awaiting us, Heaven will be THE place to be...but never give up. There ARE those of us that really DO care...
Hang in there, beautiful piece of work from a very lovely gal...
Comment By: FreeCraig David Dawson on January 6, 2005 10:44:45 AM Report
This is an amazing piece. A fave.
Comment By: FreeAndy on January 1, 2005 06:16:39 AM Report
Well writtien my freind! Excellent and tastefully done. Truly from the heart and yes we can only imagine how wonderful heaven is compared to earth! Great write!
Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on December 30, 2004 06:03:22 PM Report
Such a sad write the pain is etched in each word, nice work.


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