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Author Name: Freetruegirl 2 Comments
Date Added: January 02, 2005 16:01:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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What as our world become?
What has our world become? What have we done? We turn on our t.v. and what do we see: innocent people dying Raped women crying Children dying of starvation Wars between nations Twin towers falling down Missing people that need to be found Thousands of people whos blood has been shed New infectious diseases that constantly spread School killings in numerous states People who decide their own fate Need I say more? Or has your heart already hit the floor? God has almost lost control For the devil has the majority of our souls This world is full of monsters And the worst is that its the people among us Where is the hope,the laughter and the trust? From what I see its all turned to dust This world may be coming to an end So be sure to make God your #1 friend For hes the only one that can save us now So make him proud Be the person he intended us to be And he alone will set you free.
Author's Notes:
I wanted to write about the world today and I couldve written a whole book full of horrors that we witness daily but instead I wrote a small part of what the majority of people feel en there heart....all we see now a days is death and mourning..and the worst part of all of this is that we kill our own species for pleasure or because of some stupid dispute between nations..I hope you all endured this because the whole time I was writing this my hand was shaking...thank you for reading
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Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on February 8, 2005 06:23:15 PM Report
I know how you feel Whitney. It's very sad to know what this world has come down to. Excellent write. *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on January 4, 2005 10:53:52 AM Report
i think you misspelled the title,this is awsome,another eye opener from you,i am proud of you for this,i have also written on this,and more people should do the same,nice job whitney,joe


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