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Author Name: Freetruegirl 2 Comments
Date Added: January 04, 2005 10:01:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The fool
"I am the clown that everyone laughs at" Society has broken me I have lost all my self-esteem I can no longer fly free Not even in my dreams For my conscience mind also feels The mocking and insults that I have received And its all to real To not believe I am the fool with which they play I am a little toy That they constantly betray My life they want to destroy And they have succeeded For they have broken my soul From the way I have been treated It was my being they stole When all I wanted was to fit in To find a place where I would be accepted I committed so many sins So that in the end, I would be rejected They don't care how badly they've hurt me To them I'm just a stupid girl Who was never worthy To be a part of their world And once again I am the fool Which they beat upon I was the fuel That helped them carry on.
Author's Notes:
I was having a bad day with my self esteem
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Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on January 4, 2005 12:50:02 PM Report
you are a very special person with the gift of the pen,nothing matters in this world,except your self conscience days ended after high school,and yours will too,another good write,joe
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on January 4, 2005 12:14:07 PM Report
Whitney, you write very well and
in my eyes have no reason to have
self esteem issues. I don't know
anything about the other aspects
of your life but one place you
'fit in' is at CP.

Admiring your work, Linda


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