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Author Name: Premiumwordsworthswords 14 Comments
Date Added: January 13, 2005 09:01:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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TRUE COMPANION
The day that I first saw you,
was the day my life had begun,
I need you by my side,
my true companion.

I have so much love for you,
a love that weighs a ton,
I am nothing without you,
my true companion.

When God created you,
he created the greatest woman under the sun,
My world evolves around you,
my true companion.

Whenever I see you,
I feel like a loaded gun,
I love you so much,
my true companion.

I don't want other women,
for me you are the only one,
My heart yearns only for you,
my true companion.
Author's Notes:
I know Marc Cohn has a song out with the same title,this is my version, Joe
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKelli on February 8, 2005 10:56:52 AM Report
I had to smile when I read this. I especially like the line where you say " ...whenever I see you, I feel like a loaded gun, I love you so much..." Oh! My heart knows that feeling and sometimes it feels so full and so intense I have to wonder if it will burst! :) This is great, Kelli :)
Comment By: FreeMegan on January 30, 2005 03:58:46 AM Report
Strong words of a devoted lover. The words you've chosen and the way you've expressed them enable the reader to practically feel exactly what you feel. Another job well done.
Comment By: FreeGlata on January 18, 2005 07:10:06 AM Report
This is a great dedication to someone very special to you. Every woman can only dream of someone loving her that much. Cling tight to her and she will to you, if she's worthy of your love.
I like your version of this song :)

Glata
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on January 17, 2005 08:20:40 AM Report
Very good Joe, you said it simply and so well. Henry
Comment By: FreeMary AnnieA.V. on January 15, 2005 02:27:40 AM Report
theres some1 who knows his mind..well..rare these days.. where ppl tend to wander..anna maria
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 13, 2005 09:55:03 PM Report
You sound absolutely certain...you know which woman you want. I'm sure she will love this poem.

~Barbara~
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 13, 2005 07:59:31 PM Report
JOE,
THIS IS A VERY PRETTY POEM I REALLY ENJOYED THIS A LOT..HOW ROMANTIC!! SHE MUST BE SOMETHING...FRIENDS ~ SHE
Comment By: Freegrneyedbtch on January 13, 2005 04:00:12 PM Report
so dreamy...i love this! awesome write. keep writing-livi
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on January 13, 2005 01:19:19 PM Report
Awww, what a sweet write Joe. *hats off to you* *S* Cynthia
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on January 13, 2005 11:32:27 AM Report
Your version is better than the
original. It was a joy to read.
Linda

ps: thanks again for the dance
Comment By: Freewhitney on January 13, 2005 11:26:51 AM Report
beautifully written poem and also has a touching meaning you are very talented and I know i have already told you this but I will keep on telling you because it is true..this was great keep em coming!
-whitney-truegirl-
Comment By: FreeReBeL CuTiE on January 13, 2005 10:34:15 AM Report
Joe~
My Dear Friend~ This is a beautiful version. To be loved like this is one of my biggest dreams!
Great Work !!
~Kelly
Comment By: Freecrying wolfe on January 13, 2005 10:33:40 AM Report
What a lovely poem Joe...I do that from time to time...write my own versions....thanks for sharing...

Wolfe...
Comment By: FreeBlueyes05 on January 13, 2005 09:25:30 AM Report
I love it... its short but its got meaning... awesome write -blueyes -Amanda~




 


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