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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 4 Comments
Date Added: January 19, 2005 09:01:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Fallen Angel
The smallest mirror fragments all over the place

Rage smashed it to pieces for seeing his face

Clenched fists dripping blood on the floor

Eyes black as night his soul weeps no more

His white wings now red and bloody

They lay still where they fell to ground

The fallen angel cut them off

Without making a sound

This servant of the goodness

Hath given up his cherished role

Fallen for the forbidden female

Cost the angel his soul

The blade of good intentions

Has blackened in his hand

Memories of who he was

Blown away like grains of sand

The sword he holds is heavy

It cuts right through his past

Like a snowball down a hill

Corruption hit him fast

Love he gave his life for

Has brought him too his knees

The fallen angel fell too fast

For love he tried to please

The single tear that escaped

Is held firmly in its place

Soon as it broke for freedom

It had frozen on his face

A broken shadow of existence

Dressed down in rag clothing

Stabbed himself to death

The weapon was self-loathing

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Comment By: FreeCherie on January 20, 2005 05:06:25 AM Report
wow man, that is totally awsome. its so good! i love it. and the fact of the power of self-loathing, cause its a powerful emotion. its scary cause its reads so well and everything :)
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on January 19, 2005 12:44:32 PM Report
This one makes me ache for you Nate, the feeling, the pain, the horror. A stunning, frightening image.
Love Cat
Comment By: FreeLiquid Poetess on January 19, 2005 10:29:28 AM Report
omg I have to say I have read this over & over & over & everytime is just as good as the have such a wonderful gift........& stop blushing LOL
Comment By: FreeCandy on January 19, 2005 10:05:15 AM Report
omg Im almost in tears! A very sad but great write!! Pulled me straight in I could actually see it! Great write sweets!



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