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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 4 Comments
Date Added: January 19, 2005 09:01:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Fallen Angel
The smallest mirror fragments all over the place



Rage smashed it to pieces for seeing his face



Clenched fists dripping blood on the floor



Eyes black as night his soul weeps no more







His white wings now red and bloody



They lay still where they fell to ground



The fallen angel cut them off



Without making a sound







This servant of the goodness



Hath given up his cherished role



Fallen for the forbidden female



Cost the angel his soul







The blade of good intentions



Has blackened in his hand



Memories of who he was



Blown away like grains of sand







The sword he holds is heavy



It cuts right through his past



Like a snowball down a hill



Corruption hit him fast







Love he gave his life for



Has brought him too his knees



The fallen angel fell too fast



For love he tried to please







The single tear that escaped



Is held firmly in its place



Soon as it broke for freedom



It had frozen on his face







A broken shadow of existence



Dressed down in rag clothing







Stabbed himself to death







The weapon was self-loathing











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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCherie on January 20, 2005 05:06:25 AM Report
wow man, that is totally awsome. its so good! i love it. and the fact of the power of self-loathing, cause its a powerful emotion. its scary cause its reads so well and everything :)
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on January 19, 2005 12:44:32 PM Report
This one makes me ache for you Nate, the feeling, the pain, the horror. A stunning, frightening image.
Love Cat
Comment By: FreeLiquid Poetess on January 19, 2005 10:29:28 AM Report
omg I have to say I have read this over & over & over & everytime is just as good as the first.....you have such a wonderful gift........& stop blushing LOL
Comment By: FreeCandy on January 19, 2005 10:05:15 AM Report
omg Im almost in tears! A very sad but great write!! Pulled me straight in I could actually see it! Great write sweets!

Candy:)




 


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