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Author Name: Freebr0wn_3y3d_girl 13 Comments
Date Added: January 23, 2005 12:01:42 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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“Miscarried”
Even though you're here no more, It's hard to close my delicate "thoughts door". You made me smile when I thought you were coming, Now I cry even though the birds are still humming. You, like the roses, made me bloom of you, And up to heaven now with the songbirds you flew. These moments were precious, but now my heart must heal, My love, my dear baby, I hope you will feel. 08/11/04 1:22 AM.
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I wrote this poem when I found out I miscarried : ( Please comment on this poem
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Comment By: FreeLottie on December 8, 2008 10:47:37 PM Report

GREAT WRITE AND I HONESTLY UNDERSTAND HOW U FEEL.....


Comment By: FreeCourtney Lynn on October 10, 2008 01:14:20 PM Report
Oh sweetie. I'm so sorry for your loss. I know it hurts. I know I'm young but I know how it is. It hurts. I've had two unplanned pregnancys. And lost both. I know it's very very very hard but it will get easier. I promise. Just stay strong.

Love

Morticia

Comment By: FreeJordan on May 26, 2008 12:38:24 AM Report
I have been down this road. I am not going to say it gets easier. You are a strong woman to write a poem like this. May God bless you and your baby.

Comment By: Freecarrie packard on February 25, 2008 12:52:40 PM Report
I am sorry for your loss but remember always  god has a plan we just cant always see it from here  I have lost several children and also a grandson so I know how it feels nothing will take away the pain but with faith healing can begin 
Comment By: FreeElizabeth on July 3, 2007 07:25:15 PM Report
i really liked this. i miscarried also, and it's the hardest thing i've ever been through. i have one titled 'my baby' thats about my miscarriage. beautiful write.

Comment By: FreeAntonette on March 8, 2007 03:30:44 PM Report
Hi it moved me so much because it happened to me too... It was hard to accept not because you were expecting but knowing that you have tried so hard to maintain it.. In my case I was alone there were nobody to help me only myself it was just one of my sorrowful  time in my life... =(

Comment By: Freejessica on November 7, 2006 04:10:54 PM Report
i know how you feel and this poem is great i just lost my baby
Comment By: Freesierra on November 10, 2005 04:01:24 PM Report
that was nice. i cant say that i understand how you feel buts its going to get better!
Comment By: Freechristina on October 10, 2005 11:51:51 PM Report
This is such a sad poem. Just remember your baby is up in Heaven, still looking at his wonderful mother. Dont give up your hope you may some day have a baby all of the features you have wanted in a baby. Keep it up. Kia kaha.(I am from New Zealand, in other words. Keep your chin up.)
Comment By: FreeMelissa Quarles on September 23, 2005 11:28:34 AM Report
I am 13 and I found out I was pregrent by mistake and I did not know until it was to late. I went on a ride called the zipper and I lost my baby because I did not konw I was pregrent. Not even my bestfriend knows that I was. So I feel with you. I am really sorry. Goodluck.
Comment By: FreeBrokenDreams on September 7, 2005 11:05:55 PM Report
Oh..I'm not old enough to have a child so i'm not going to say I know what you went through but this is very expressive and i'm sorry about what happened...
Comment By: FreeKeri on February 15, 2005 07:45:01 PM Report
I feel your pain.... I have been there as well and it is a hard thing to go through.... Things will get easier and the sun will shine again. The pain will always be there and the sun may not shine as bright, but you will come to smile again.
Comment By: Freewhitney on January 29, 2005 04:16:06 PM Report
Hun I have been there also but I was very very close to having my little baby girl....please read my poem.."A mothers love" and tell me what you think I know that you can apreciate it..this was wonderful and it brought tears to my eyes...please read mineª thanks so much
whitney
truegirl




 


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