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Author Name: Freetruegirl 3 Comments
Date Added: January 28, 2005 16:01:37 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A little girls story
Mommy are you mad at me??? What did I do? I already put all my toys away...see Whats wrong with you? Please don't drink that yucky stuff You always get so mad Look at all the glasses you've already had.. Mommy please don't hit me Cause at school all my friends laugh You always make me look so ugly Instead will you help me with my math?? Mommy watch out! You are going to fall! Mommy wake up! your bleeding! Who should I call? Mommy why aren't you breathing? Here mommy I'll sleep with you Just hug and kiss me Thats what you used to do But its ok I still love you ................................ ......................... Mommy don't go away! Why are they putting that blanky over your face? Mommy come on, get up and lets go play We will play monopoly or a running race HEY! wait, where are taking her!? I want to go to! Hey thats MY mother!!!! "MOMMY I LOVE YOU!!!!!"
Author's Notes:
This poem was written from true events and the little girl is only five years old....she hasnt spoken since her mother died which was two months ago...please pray for her..her name is charolette and she really could use our prayers..thanks for reading!
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on January 30, 2005 02:52:28 AM Report
the way you capitalize the words,the rhyme and the flow add to the poem,great write whitney,joe
Comment By: FreeMichael Ruger on January 29, 2005 08:25:48 AM Report
And how many little girls and boys cried out those same words just in the last week ? Mommy's like those are discounted everyday instead of helped.
The question is will we let that little girl follow in her mommys footsteps.
A very good job of telling such a tragic story .
WRITE ON
MIKE
Comment By: FreeDanielle on January 28, 2005 05:16:57 PM Report
Oh my Word, I cried!!! Charolette will be in prayers tonight...I hope everything turns out good for her...Whitney this is such a good poem/story...Keep writing...Dani




 


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