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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 5 Comments
Date Added: January 29, 2005 08:01:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Alone in the Darkness
Alone within the darkness I stand eyes red raw and streaming

Still alive in this coma and so awake though I am dreaming

Jeans are so muddy as the press down into the ground

Hands brown and raw on the hard earth I now pound

Internally bleeding promised myself I wouldnít cry

Bloody tears are of frustration no one will tell me why

Concerned people doing their very best to now explain

But nothing they can say will ease me from this pain

How is it that on me you still have this massive hold?

Another year has gone past and still you havenít told

Oh Iím sure she has her reasons people still say

Is there a good enough reason for what you took away?

Standing over what I have made an unmarked grave

You gave me nothing more but I still have to be brave

The rain falls and itís tears from heaven above

Covering me wetly like a hand into a glove

On the ground I leave a little brown teddy bear

Just to tell my baby that daddy had been there

A heartbreaking day comes my way

In the gloom and rain of May

My babyís mother I havenít forgiven to this day

For taking my baby, dreams and hopes away

Author's Notes:
R.I.P Little One Though you never had name You was my joy Nathaniel
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Comment By: FreeCherie on January 31, 2005 03:58:14 AM Report
thats so sad!
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on January 30, 2005 01:35:43 PM Report
Now one can feel just what you did, know can ache enough to help you relieve this, but in this heart breaking write you come darn close. Amazing work my Brother.
Love your Cat
Comment By: Freewhitney on January 29, 2005 08:18:20 PM Report
Your words expressed such pain that made me feel so hurt while I was reading this poem..the sadness overwhelmed me...Yet only a tru poet can make the readers not only read the poem but feel it as well you did a marvolous job and you are very gifted! great write and hope to read many more!
Comment By: FreeLiquid Poetess on January 29, 2005 09:00:17 AM Report
I really feel your pain through these words...

Like I explained I don't just read the poems and they automatically hit me I like to take a little while to taste every word, and digest them slowly...
I am an emotional gal and this poem made me cry.....and you know anytime you need me I am here.

Jo x
Comment By: FreeYumiko Monou on January 29, 2005 08:55:01 AM Report
This is sad. Beautiful..Great write.. I'm speachless..


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