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Author Name: Freelizzie_x 2 Comments
Date Added: February 01, 2005 12:02:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Žose
when the cold truned to frost and the day turns to night when im desserted here left alone with my fright i wonder silently to myself why was i ever born? dragged into this wretched world this existence that is torn The place created by God or just atoms and matter but when i look out i see one terrible disaster A feeling its wrong no hope and no fear no flame burns within it happens year after year when the sun slowly rises and the birds begin to sing i see the place i should be i feel for the angels wing There's the suns warmth around me but it can never break through the cold within has spread now on the outside too! Why did they bring me? Why was i born? in every family, there is one every rose must have a thorn But is it the thorn you see? or are your eyes drawn to beauty such hard conditions it grew but it still draws you into see!
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just thinking really!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTom Smith on June 4, 2007 07:50:28 PM Report
That was very deep. I like that in a poem. Certainly kept my attention. Good job.
Comment By: FreeAPC on August 19, 2005 01:38:35 PM Report
Oh, I like it. Makes you think! On the sad side, but I love sad stuff. A beautiful poem! =3

-Huggles from APC




 


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