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Author Name: Freeluzzyluz62000 4 Comments
Date Added: February 03, 2005 10:02:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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You Wonder Why I Stare
Sometimes you already know how I'll react,

but thats what makes this so special.

You know when and how to do things......

Like the way you whisper in my ears when I'm only washing dishes and place your hands around my waist.

Slowly breathing into my ear
the words that I want to hear......

Time stops as I float.....

Warm water drips from my fingers....

So much happens.......

So little time....

Mind feeling as if love has literally been made......

And you wonder why I manage to finish so quickly,

You wonder why I stare.....


Author's Notes:
This isn't about me, but sometimes females get together and we talk about things to each other about the little things that guys do.....not exactly everything....lol, but those special things. This one kinda sprung from my friend Shekia who was sharing an experience. This is written in prose so its kinda laid out differently, but I hope you liked it anyway.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAutumn E. on July 2, 2009 09:09:34 AM Report
This poem got me in the mood to wash some dishes!  LOL  Great write!

~Autumn

Comment By: Freealissa on December 27, 2007 04:01:45 AM Report

I have been trying to write something about this, and it has been bugging me for a while. You put it into words perfectly. I can finally move on! : ) Very well written!


Comment By: FreeRin Marie on March 19, 2007 04:07:12 PM Report

This is beautiful.  I love it, It is definitly going in my favorites


Comment By: FreeDan on February 21, 2005 01:14:34 AM Report
Great poem Chelsey. Yeah I know that it is the little things that count so I try to do it myself. It is the small gesture that mean so much.

~DMAC~




 


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