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Author Name: Freelil kate 5 Comments
Date Added: February 18, 2005 00:02:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Would You Be Enough?

If the sky lost its color
And the sun turned to gray
Would I be able to have faith to say
I will trust You no matter what it takes?


If the end of my life lay before me
And I knew there was no chance
Would I just give in and let it go
Or would I fight knowing that You are in control?


If there was no one else but You
My friends and family gone
Would I believe that Your promises are true
And that You are the writer to my song?


Would You still be enough for me
If I lost everything
If I was holding onto life by just a string
Would You be enough for me?

Author's Notes:
I don't know that I like how this came out yet...I might decide I have to edit it a little, but you can give your opinion and tell me what you think. I was just thinking of Job again today and wondering if that happened to me if I would still be able to stand strong and say that God is in control and not curse but bless His name.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKat04 on April 30, 2005 12:45:56 PM Report
Kate you are very talented. I love this poem! Kat
Comment By: FreeNadia Basdeo on February 24, 2005 08:25:59 PM Report
i loved thisssssssssssssssssss
Comment By: FreeDavid on February 18, 2005 11:18:45 AM Report
I think this one is really great Kate! Sometimes I wonder too whether I would be able to take it all and remember that God is in control but I'm rather confident that I could. I bet you are too! :-D
Comment By: Freelost angel... on February 18, 2005 06:04:56 AM Report
wow...thats a very lovely poem...and yeah like james said noo ammedments are neccessary the poem's great jus the way it is
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on February 18, 2005 12:44:31 AM Report
Dear Kate-
This poem really touched me because it
reminded me of my mother-in-law during
her fight with cancer-
Shirley was a strong and indipendent woman for the 20 years I knew her when she
was diagnosed with lymphoma cancer in Oct.
of 2003-
In the next 30 days to follow she lost
her job and ability to function on her own-
She lived with us for the next 9 months and had ultimate battles with this
physical demon-
My wife could not figure out what kept her fighting for life when every thing she
had was gone-
Shirley taught me that life is most
important in this existence-
Not our houses or jobs~Not our cars or bank accounts-
Just Life~
The joy of seeing the faces of our family
and friends-
You asked for us to give our opinion-
I hope this little note tells you that I
like it just the way it is!
Shirley passed away Oct 4, 2004-
This is the first poem I've read since that day that really brought her reflection into my thoughts!
Thank you for sharing this!
Best Wishes~
Peace~
James




 


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