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Author Name: FreeSerenity 6 Comments
Date Added: March 04, 2005 23:03:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Trapped



Trapped deep inside my mind.
For so long I was kept blind.
Broken walls of trust surrounded me.
Through the darkness I could not see.

My mind had taken over.
Thinking it was my heart's protector.
Open wounds cut repeatedly.
Knife of loneliness hurt so deeply.

The only way able to cope,
Was with this false hope.
Hope for a hero so brave,
From myself they would save.

The greatest of heart's got close,
To the key that unlocked my sorrows.
But again I was left all alone,
Till I finally knew the unknown.

My mind kept me a prisoner.
My heart made me weaker.
Yet I found the hero in me.
I am fighting to set myself free.

Author's Notes:

NEVER

GIVE

UP.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCherie on May 13, 2005 01:49:34 AM Report
good message. i like this also.
Comment By: FreeChrysanthemum on April 8, 2005 06:27:01 PM Report
going in my fav. 4 sure...u really know how 2 put the right words together for the feeling I 2 also feel....another awesome write....keep in touch don't be shy love your poems!...~Chrysanthemum
Comment By: FreePhoenix on March 31, 2005 06:30:02 PM Report
Your right! YOu should never give up! It's a very nice poem.
Comment By: Freeserendipity on March 16, 2005 08:56:38 PM Report
keep fighting and like oyu said never give up
Comment By: FreeAbi on March 5, 2005 01:19:25 PM Report
Thanx for your comments they were really nice.
This is a really good write
Comment By: FreeJoseph Smith on March 5, 2005 12:57:08 PM Report
That's what I always say ;) I never give up.

Great write and keep up the good work ;)




 


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