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Author Name: FreeSusanne 14 Comments
Date Added: March 14, 2005 21:03:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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He came unto me with fire in his eyes
and love in his heart.
Hints of rose oil drifted around the room
and awakened our senses,
as shadows danced beyond
the flickering candlelight.
Beads of passion smouldered
beneath the surface of our skin
as love became the conductor of our hearts.

We welcomed love's first gentle flutterings
and succumbed to the sensual awakenings
that stirred deep within, as we
quenched our thirst for love
and indulged in the finest fruits
of passion and desire.

Our bodies were aglow beside the roaring fire
and I surrendered to the warmth of his embrace
and delighted in the tenderness of his touch.
We savoured each and every moment as our
needs became more urgent and our desires
demanded to be fulfilled.

His love coarsed throughout my veins
as night turned into morning,
and in the afterglow of love,
he left me.........breathless.

Author's Notes:
"Wine comes in at the mouth
and love comes in at the eye.
That's all we know for truth
before we grow old and die.
I lift the glass to my mouth,
I look at you, and I sigh"
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Comment By: FreeArt on December 5, 2005 08:21:44 PM Report
Beautiful poem Sue, I see you have been a busy lady. This poem is absolutely stupendeous. Your talents still never cease to amaze me!
Comment By: Freejoshua on May 6, 2005 03:35:46 PM Report
wow sue this was a wondeful poem CONGRATS ON THE AWARD :-) hope all is well i truley do miss you :-) again great write
Comment By: FreeJeff on March 31, 2005 11:59:26 AM Report
I love it when excellent writers get rewarded for their work.

Comment By: FreeOMAR J. CONTIN on March 29, 2005 02:02:14 PM Report
beautiful poem great write
Comment By: FreeRutch on March 24, 2005 08:59:43 PM Report
Wow! Your poem has left me speechless! Awesome write!
Comment By: Freejoia on March 23, 2005 08:16:48 AM Report
Sue, a lovely and classy write of love at its finest hour...congratulations on the medal, and well you should be proud, a fine poem, joia
Comment By: FreeBi bi baby on March 22, 2005 02:21:48 PM Report
Wow! Awesome write!
Comment By: FreeBOB on March 22, 2005 02:14:01 PM Report
As I said before, a beautiful sensuous poem in a lovely romantic setting,I can almost feel the warmth from the fire and see the shadows dancing, congratulations Sue on your award,
Grinned, Bob :)
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on March 22, 2005 12:51:39 AM Report
Congratulations on the well deserved award.
This poem is very sensual and lovely.
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on March 21, 2005 03:34:33 AM Report
This is beautiful, romantic and sensuous. Very good poem. Congratulations on the award.
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on March 20, 2005 10:38:27 PM Report
Oh Sue...this is so very romantic and beautiful and certainly deserving of the award. Congratulations my friend.

Sharon JJ
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 20, 2005 10:26:22 PM Report
Splendid work...very romantic & sensuous!!

I congratulate you on behalf of CP administration and staff!

Comment By: FreeBOB on March 20, 2005 09:39:29 PM Report
A beautiful piece of poetry,breathless,yes, but warm and tender, Bob :)
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on March 15, 2005 12:23:29 AM Report
Gentle Dove


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