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Author Name: FreeSmileNoMore 13 Comments
Date Added: March 31, 2005 23:03:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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“Don’t Wanna Say Good-bye…”
What am I doing here?

What am I pursuing here

Why do I fear like this?

It is him I miss

This life is so confusing

I never end up choosing

I don’t like this feeling

But my mind is slowly healing.

This is my calling

I fell myself falling

My heart is screaming

And my eyes gleaming

Am I confused or mad

Frustrated or sad

All the memories I had

Have not all gone bad.

Slowly understanding

What god is commanding

But what’s going on?

Why is he gone?

I miss him so truly

I took it so brutally

I don’t want to say goodbye

I wish he didn’t die….

Author's Notes:

This was when my brother died ....

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Comments:
Comment By: Freejakemcqueen on May 21, 2010 09:13:08 AM Report
Sorry about about your loss, it does sound as if he's truly missed.

                                                                                                          Dr. Jay

Comment By: FreeEmma Jackson on December 6, 2009 03:49:01 AM Report
Yoour poem shows so much emotion. it really clicked to me, i may not have lost my bro, but i sorta know what its like, my uncle passed away yesti, Goodluck with the healing... sorry to hear about your loss*moment slience *

Emmah x

 

Comment By: TrialBarbara Hayes on July 31, 2009 10:31:31 PM Report
My friend ,

               My daughter passed away 4 years ago so i can feel the heartbreaking pain you are going through. i am so sorry for your loss, this poem was simply lovely.

                        Barbie

Comment By: FreeMelissa on October 2, 2006 09:59:53 PM Report
Hey im sorry about your brother. I really liked your poem it was really interesting.
Comment By: FreeNancy on January 16, 2006 06:25:43 AM Report
Sammi this is soooo good...It reminds me of a friend of mine that was dieing and didnt want to in the hospital he wanted to die in his own home so i told him if that is what he wanted that is what he would get and i took care of him until he died in my arms some of your words i ask myself almost everyday. I miss him so much!
Comment By: FreeChelsey on December 21, 2005 06:00:30 PM Report
My brother died to unexpectingly he was the youngest he was only six yet god took him from me it is exactly how i felt
Comment By: FreeRene' on May 19, 2005 10:07:24 AM Report
My heart to yours. Grief is the deepest emotion one can ever experience. Only those who have grieved the loss of a loved one truly knows just how deep grief really goes.

Wishing you a gentle healing.

Rene'
Comment By: FreeMakenna on May 9, 2005 11:01:45 PM Report
omg i am sooo sorry about your brother, it was probably {by the tell of this poem} a deep loss ... i am sooo sorry... great poem! ...~*MoMeNtS oF sIlEnCe*~
Comment By: FreeSiDra on April 16, 2005 06:56:43 PM Report
SO sorry bout ur bro!! this is a very sad poem and i hope you heal with time...*a moment of silence*

~Sidra
Comment By: FreeSiDra on April 16, 2005 06:55:30 PM Report
SO sorry bout ur bro!! this is a very sad poem and i hope you heal with time...*a moment of silence*

~Sidra
Comment By: Free.. ..Pocket Monster.. .. on April 7, 2005 06:47:42 PM Report
I'm sorry bout your bro BL *hug hug*
I don't think you can really completely get over the loss of a loved one...but best of luck with the healing.
And I really hope the rest of your life is great, 'cause you're a really great person
Comment By: FreeKevin on April 1, 2005 08:32:50 AM Report
Sorry for your loss. what you have here is a memorable tribute to him. Very nicely written. I like the way it flows.
Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on April 1, 2005 02:21:32 AM Report
Sammi,
I am so sorry for the loss of your' brother. U have penned your' feelings beautifully, and I am sure your' brother would love this poem. What a wonderful tribute to him. God bless you.
Jillian




 


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