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Author Name: Freedyoung 4 Comments
Date Added: April 02, 2005 22:04:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Chad

A poem should have an amazing opening line;
One which defines the subject wholly.
A line to let the reader know
Which direction the poet will go.

Here I've sat at this computer
Thinking maybe I'm stuck because I lack a pen.
But writing of you is as complicated
As writing of where my heart's been.

You...you. And I smile.
This is where my poem dissolves.
How can I write words that convey
That you are the sun around which I revolve?

You...you. Here I sigh.
And this is where my thoughts disband.
How can I describe your power on me?
Your complete and pure command?

You...you. Here I stay.
For no words written will incite
My heart to reveal what it yearns to proclaim
As I think of you tonight.

Author's Notes:
Feel so in love - have no words. Darn mind, hands, and heart aren't cooperating...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 26, 2005 10:20:30 PM Report
oh my dear Dori! What a wonderful state to be in. A blessed state and no mistake!!!
Alison SW
Comment By: FreeA.P. on April 6, 2005 10:52:22 PM Report
aaah how this is something that happens to me: whenever i have something i'm so passionate and want to write about, i just stare...i can't think of the perfect enough words to describe it. And then i usually write a poem about writer's block, hehe. Anyways, you did a great job of expressing how special he is to you in not be able to express it (if that makes sense). I liked the format and the style that this piece followed...nicely done
good write
Comment By: PremiumPaul on April 4, 2005 08:42:04 PM Report
I found my response here turning into a poem So you will have to see "God Given Masterpiece" to see my comment other than to say both you and Chad are great friends and great people.
Paul
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on April 3, 2005 09:34:47 AM Report
Oh, but they are cooperating, Dori. They are cooperating perfectly. You just stand back and see. This is the sweetest love story, even a man who doesn't like poetry would have to blush at this. What a guy. Well done, pal. Very well done. ML




 


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