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Author Name: FreeSavanahB 9 Comments
Date Added: April 04, 2005 19:04:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Razor to My Flesh

I am so depressed, I take a razor

And cut my freakiní flesh

I will bleed until folks notice me

Even if it means my death

Donít you feel any pity for me?

Must I slash some more?

Hey look here world! I am in pain

Iím breaking at my core

I could try to fit in the real world

But that donít sound like fun?

Iíd rather sit in my mental prison

And suck the barrel of a gun!

The sharp steel against my flesh

Cold metal on my lips

I feel the bite of blade on skin

Taking life in little nips

I scream out for attention

But I have no voice

Pain will let me know I live

To Ďfeelí, Ihave no choice

Author's Notes:
OK, Jody...Madam Sorceress! This 'cuts' for you! LMAO!
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Comments:
Comment By: Freecrying wolfe on April 22, 2005 01:04:25 AM Report
Well hell, this hurt to read lol...I never did and never will understand why people have to cut themselves....oh I realize they do it for attention blah blah...damn , can you imagine if the whole world were full of cutters??? This is one gory poem lol....

Wolfe...
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 19, 2005 04:24:42 AM Report
well aint no doubt you write one helluva poem!!!
I used to get so annoyed at the people who came into casualty having cut themselves but now I view it in a different light.
The worst case I heard of was a guy on Jerry Springer who cut off his penis with a pair of garden shears to spite his boyfriend!..........
Talk about cutting off your nose to spite your face!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Alison SW
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 9, 2005 04:51:48 AM Report
Once, after reading a girl's tenth suicide by knife poem, I suggested she try the pointy end, as she seemed to be having difficulty, getting the job done...This reminds me of my write, "Teenage Wastland"...Go ahead...cut...I'm not going to feel sorry for you...So, THERE!..Neener Neener...len
Comment By: Freeerma todd on April 7, 2005 05:38:44 PM Report
Oh my there are people who cut themselves. I'm speechless at how well this poem is written. I think it is one of your best..love Erma
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on April 5, 2005 02:14:13 PM Report
Oh, this is JUST what I was dyin' for this mornin'~!! Oooppssss....Now this is tragically wonderful~!! Loved it~! But, I am always likin' a 'sharp' work~!!
Love, the old bag lady, goin' into shock
Comment By: FreeIngwa on April 5, 2005 01:27:41 PM Report
Savanah, cut cut cut, lemme see then lemme faint. I don't like cutting but I can understand it...especially this one that's really taking the ...
Comment By: FreeGlata on April 5, 2005 08:02:52 AM Report
Only one word for ya....EWWWWWWWW!
LOL you and Jody are NUTS!
Good write...I guess? Jody, aka Jolene, said you would get back at her...and you got 'er good!
Glata
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on April 4, 2005 09:28:23 PM Report
If that sorceress of ours inspired this
tell her to knock it off. This is too
real for comfort. You two are nuts. lol
Powerful poem Savanah.
Linda
Comment By: FreeJo on April 4, 2005 07:32:44 PM Report
Wow... This is a very powerful poem. I like that there is actual admittance (is that a word...? lol) that the person cuts wanting attention. That makes it more powerful, and the rhyme scheme is perfect! I really enjoyed this one. (And hope all gets better for you!) Nice one. -Jo




 


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