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Author Name: FreeCeeCee 5 Comments
Date Added: April 07, 2005 08:04:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Aged One

Death is moving in
T
o clean out my mind
T
o sweep away my thoughts
T
o tie up my tongue

D
eath is moving in
T
o put blinds upon my eyes
T
o bundle up my legs
T
o haul out my hands

D
eath is moving in
T
o box up my breath

Author's Notes:
...for the elderly whose health is failing...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 30, 2005 03:47:26 AM Report
Splendid work CeeCee...death shuts it all down. I really enjoyed this one...especially the abrupt ending...as it should be when the breah has been boxed up. Whether intentional or not...that was effective.

Great job!

~Barbara~
Comment By: on April 9, 2005 05:44:04 PM Report
WOW

THaT WAS SO GOODDDDD ~!!!!!!!! loved it ~
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on April 9, 2005 05:16:29 PM Report
Dear Cari~
From the moment of our first breath
We must learn to embrace death
And the pages we write between the layers
Can leave us as slayed or slayers-
I thought this piece carried a lot of
thought in its short delivery-
I liked it!!!!
Best Wishes to You and Yours~
Peace~
James
Comment By: on April 8, 2005 08:13:25 AM Report
Yes death can be offensive sometime, guess we all hope for a calm death surrounded by our loved ones, but sometimes it is just sad..Interesting piece Cari
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 7, 2005 11:48:26 AM Report
HOW HEART FELT THIS POEM IS DEAR ~ SHE




 


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