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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 5 Comments
Date Added: July 09, 2003 19:07:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Girl Dedication
Your looks are just too stunning, I lose the words to say

I canít help but stare at you, you take my breath away.

They say you have a boyfriend that leaves me in dismay.

Hope he treats you how Iíd treat you, like royalty itís true

Itís hard to not be with you, it makes a sunny day seem blue.

Not sure what to do no where left to turn.

Take a gamble and confess my feelings could mean I crash and burn.

Easy in this poem to put my words to life, harder to actually say them.

I guess thatís the price.

Wishing it was simple in a world where nothing is.

Not holding my breath that I will get that kiss.

Words of sadness ponder an empty soul at night.

Why do I feel dumber when your locked up in my sight.

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Comment By: FreeAbi on January 18, 2007 12:05:25 PM Report
This is really good... i like it.
Comment By: Freejazzdude on March 12, 2004 06:38:39 AM Report
dont crash and burn....crashing and burning myself as of this moment...not a nice feeling....
Comment By: FreeJennifer on February 3, 2004 04:31:56 PM Report
This is so cute! I would just melt if someone wrote something half as nice as this for me!!!
Comment By: FreeCara on February 2, 2004 05:39:32 PM Report
Aw, cute! You just gotta let her know how you feel. Forget that she has a boyfriend. You never know...She might be waiting for you, too. It might be worth the risk. Good luck in whatever you choose.
Comment By: FreeJenn on July 16, 2003 06:30:32 PM Report
That poem is sooo sweet. I think I love is so much emotion and sweetness behind this. GREAT write!


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