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Author Name: Freelubaina 5 Comments
Date Added: April 22, 2005 07:04:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The music is gone
I sit with this loneliness that has captured me..
I try but can't sing all the songs
that had always been so easy for me...
I feel this loneliness inside of me....
Why....Why, did he have to leave me?

The notes of once happy songs
are gone from this heart..
I can't play the keys...
I can't remember how..I try and try
to get these happy notes
flowing out again,
but no matter how hard I try
I just can't begin...
the notes seem lost somewhere
deep inside me...
I, hit my fingers on the keys the sound that
come out is filled with only misery..

My mind and soul filled with confusion
the man I loved just walked out of my life,
leaving me paralyzed from the notes
that my heart once played
and my soul once felt...
The music is gone from this
heart....soul...from me
forever..

Lubaina


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeEric on February 6, 2006 08:04:29 AM Report
Your picture is very, very well drawn- a picture of being without the source, but having to "go through the motions". Most excellent.
EriF
Comment By: FreeHelen on April 25, 2005 06:00:34 AM Report
a sad but beautiful and sincere poem...
Comment By: FreeDeepa on April 22, 2005 09:48:12 AM Report
yes i can understand ....once that man leaves u ,u lose the charm in the song.....well written
love,
deeps
Comment By: FreeMichael Barnicle on April 22, 2005 07:31:42 AM Report
I agree very sad. It is all true and, yes, very beautifully written. I know what you mean too. After this sort of thing happens all the meanings and feelings you get from a great song seems gone. There seems like there's nothing in there anymore. Great write, like this one a lot.
-Barnicle
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on April 22, 2005 07:18:29 AM Report
This is sad, but beautifully written, Lubaina.
I wish you all the best.
Samantha.




 


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