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Author Name: Freewritelady 6 Comments
Date Added: April 22, 2005 18:04:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Don't Save Me
Lord,
I could drown in his face;
his smile, his laugh
those blue green eyes.
A watery ocean of soul.
Like a rip tide,
they suck me in,
rendering me helpless
Tired of treading,
Lord,
the love inside knows almost no depth.
I cannot skim the surface forever.
In his wake he leaves
tiny tide pools, inside me,
to help this ache
that I feel when he is gone.
Lord,
it is useless to swim,
he has captured me
made me addicted to his
waves of  affection and desire.
Surrendering, I allow
this feeling to wash over me,
Lungs filling with 
crazy burning,
a release and acceptance of sweetness.
Lord,
do not save me
this time.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDreamBreaker on July 13, 2006 09:09:51 AM Report
OMY! Wow! That is one of the best poems I have read on this site!!

Well done!

Holly

Comment By: FreeGlata on July 5, 2005 10:17:37 AM Report
Babe, this is AWESOME! Loved it...every single line, and I can SOOOOOOOOO relate!
Love ya gal!
Your NC Sis...
Glata
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on April 28, 2005 07:07:09 AM Report
Very nice , Is Barbie in love? Beautiful write showing the helplessness of falling in love. Henry
Comment By: Freecrying wolfe on April 25, 2005 10:44:53 PM Report
Now, you have captured falling in love just perfect!!! This is an excellent poem ....bravo!!!

Wolfe...
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on April 24, 2005 10:27:19 PM Report
I might be wrong here, but........ Are you in love? Very nice, Joe
Comment By: Freetom on April 22, 2005 11:31:15 PM Report
very lucky man who gets the heart of this poet great Write Barbie lots of passion and soul put into words of love
hugs kisses
tom




 


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