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Author Name: FreeDragonWingedWolf 5 Comments
Date Added: April 23, 2005 18:04:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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We are the damned

We are the damned,

we lay in maggot infested sheets,

as creatures feast on our flesh.

Rats lay under our feet.

We are the damned,

We cry tears of acid,

that burn through our eyes.

We fall off cliffs,

and in jagged rocks we lie.

The water carries us,

into the world we shouldn't be.

Vultures pull at our eyes,

so we can no longer see.

So they're only bloody sockets.

Our faces, deformed and knifed.

Evil creatures hurting us,

Taken over our life.

Pulling at years of thread sewn into our soul.

Needles sticking in, as if we're voodoo dolls.

And we're dismembered and decapitated.

We're so lonely.

We're so hated.

We are the damned....

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeEric on September 20, 2006 02:48:43 PM Report
Very dark but meaningful as well what a great write. keep it up.
Comment By: FreeShane Arnold on May 28, 2006 09:46:48 PM Report
well this gave some very vivid thoughts you've some very dark poetry, but it is well written so I can't say I don't like it

keep up the good work

Comment By: Freelittle jonny frostbite on July 21, 2005 06:50:43 PM Report
very deep, i really like this
Much love
Mia
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on April 23, 2005 06:59:33 PM Report
Dear blackluna~
Yet as we venture further into the dark
We are horrified by thoughts that embark
How we had became the plauge we designed
And trapped by the dungeons of our mind
In vast wastelands of our own destructive directions
And personal mental and psychological dissections
Forming these chains that now bond
Floating face first in the stagnant pond
Bloating
Endlessly
Forever
THIS WAS A MIND KICKER!!!!
I thought your descriptives in this were
absolutely hypnotizing-
Great Piece of Writing!
Best Wishes~
Peace~
James
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on April 23, 2005 06:35:38 PM Report
Very dark, but very well written, nice job, Joe




 


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