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Author Name: Freebehind_blue_eyes 3 Comments
Date Added: May 04, 2005 04:05:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Apathetic state

Ever wonder how I feel
As day by day
Fades away
And life moves on without me

Stop to think
Stop to care
No
You just count on the fact that Iíll be here
To lend an ear
When your Ďnew friendsí arenít there.

Sometimes life it twists and turns
I think Iím one of the people it burns
A twist of fate
A stab of hate
A victim of an apathetic state.

So have you ever wondered
Cared how I feel
Have you ever stopped
And looked around
Have you ever noticed
Youíre not the only thing that matters
You know there are others
Like me
Out here

And so you burn us
Right to the ground
You crush and destroy us
Without a sound
But the tinkling laughter
That accompanies your rage
Lifeís not a book
You canít just turn the page

Iím all burnt out now
I canít go on
Iím suicidal
My heart is gone
Iím cold and broken
No will no more
Take me away from here
To another shore

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCarolina on May 7, 2005 02:29:17 PM Report
no way! this cant be written by you. your such a happy person n u always make me happy. though this is a great poem. i hope your okie.
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on May 6, 2005 03:11:16 PM Report
I hope this isn't you now! If it is I am here for you, you should know that by now. Sad but nicely written, Joe
Comment By: FreeChere on May 4, 2005 07:09:20 AM Report
well written, i can feel your emotions.
xxx




 


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