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Author Name: Freelubaina 7 Comments
Date Added: May 25, 2005 14:05:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Suicide
What is going on?
Why is this happening to me?
I feel locked up,
Nobody will let me free.
I cry myself to sleep,
Hoping for the strength to go on,
But nobody cares.
They will... when I'm gone.
You said,I don't feel with you like I was before
I knew I had nothing new to offer
I just have my life
and I give you that I promise
then u'll understand
Why I took my life today
I try to patch the wounds
That are in my heart so deep

No one tried to help me
When I was feeling down
They just went on with their lives
As if I wasn't around
If only one person
Had something nice to say
Maybe I would be here
Alive this very day
But maybe if someone loved me
Or showed me that they cared
Maybe I would be here
Now they'll shed a tear."
Sincerely,
The one not treated fairly

Everyone will see this,
I will tie it to my arm,
So when I'm there sleeping with pills,
No one can give me any more harm.
And all this could've been stopped,
If someone put a smile on my face,
But because no one cared,
I'm in a different place.

Lubaina.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freemystical angel on October 14, 2006 12:33:08 PM Report
as time passes things improve

but all my friends who had someone close commiting suicide still bear the brunt

god bless


Comment By: FreeSurvivingInSanity on October 4, 2006 03:55:12 PM Report
after a boy in my class commited sucide i always thought "why didnt i just go talk to him?" i mean i had a crush on him and stuff, what if i could have made him happy, but now he is gone and there is nothing i can do but treat every person i meet as if they felt the same way. dont worry hat people are going to think about you if your nice to them if you get embarrased whatever. change a life give a smile. very awesome right. very true.
Comment By: Freepainandlove on September 2, 2005 04:53:10 PM Report
This truely hit home Lubs...it rings with the kind of saddness and anger I felt when I was majorly suicidle...You do have a way of putting emotions in. I did truely enjoy it because it is well written.
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on August 18, 2005 09:04:41 AM Report
Dear Lubaina-
The saddest part about suicide is that the pain
we think we are escaping from does not dissipate
simply because we exit this level-
We carry the emotional state with us whether we
are in body or soul-
Sometimes when we die even through natural causes
people come out of the woodwork who weren't there
when it counted-
So by creating our own ending we acomplish nothing-
The sad thing is by the time we realize that-
It is too late to turn back-
May this thought you have written be a message to
others and not a self-portrait-
For the world needs the strength you offer through
your words-
Best Wishes to You My Friend~
Peace~
James
Comment By: on July 21, 2005 01:16:00 AM Report
WOW!!
this poem is really well ritten
it is scary but i like it
ivy
xxx
Comment By: FreePoetic Soldier on July 20, 2005 09:13:26 AM Report
Sad poem my friend if you are ever feeling like taking a jump of the bridge of despair let me know and I'll make sure i'm at the bottom with a crash mat.

Nathaniel
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on May 30, 2005 11:33:57 AM Report
I hope you are not writing about yourself Lubs.
You capture the inner agony of abandonment the depressed feel when the world has stopped turning for them...but for others it just keeps going.
Good work but I hope it is not about you.
Alison SW who cares.




 


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