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Date Added: June 15, 2005 23:06:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I AM A DARK WORLD

I am a dark world,
a no man's land,
From the coldest of cold,
to the dryest of sand.

I am a dark world,
a world of such dread,
I am the worst of worlds,
I am a world of the dead.

I am a dark world,
a world of fright,
A world of horror,
a terrible sight!

I am a dark world,
a world of pain and sorrow,
A world of forever,
where there is no tomorrow.

I am a dark world,
a world of the bad,
A world of chains,
a world of the mad.

Author's Notes:

This is 17 years old. I found several old poems. Thank you, Joe

 June 21, 1988

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Comment By: Freehiddendragon on July 2, 2005 12:18:47 PM Report
He, he...just about exactly the day I graduated :o)

Ack...not such a dark world is it...but at that sensitive moment in life, actually it was.

Well written Joe, great job.

Dragon~
Comment By: Freecrying wolfe on June 17, 2005 01:37:08 PM Report
Holy hell! no matter how old the poem is, gave me shivers to read....the words kinda jumped out at me...

Wolfe...adding it to favs...
Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on June 16, 2005 05:04:18 PM Report
Wow if you wrote this 17 years ago. Just like a good wine, you just keep getting better and better with age. Great job.
Yours..........Tracy
Comment By: FreeCandy on June 16, 2005 11:43:51 AM Report
well you were just as good at 17.... well done!!

Candy:)
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 16, 2005 11:13:32 AM Report
Hope you have found the light by now Joe. Poem certainly speaks of despair.
Alison SW
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on June 16, 2005 05:58:43 AM Report
Very dark but, very, very good. Henry
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 16, 2005 04:03:42 AM Report
JOE, THIS IS A VERY POWERFUL POEM... SO MUCH CAN HAPPEN TO CHANGE OUR WORLD...GREAT POEM...FOOD FOR THOUGH
~ SHE
Comment By: FreeLiquid Poetess on June 16, 2005 03:19:46 AM Report
One day you will write
Darkness will disappear
Life will ignite
All will become clear

Many years from now
You will be in a new place
And you will not allow
Anything other than grace

Inside you is a light
People can't resist
Shining so very bright
Believe me I insist

One day you will inspire
Your soul will be free
Lifting spirits higher
I know others will agree

Seventeen years down the line
I hope the darkness has passed
And the colour of day vs night
Is a more comfortable contrast

Now that the time has come
I hope is all that you desire
I hope your world has become
A world of all that you require.

I think it's amazing that 17 years ago you wrote this.
I hope I can loook back in time and re-live old emotions.. good or bad, just to see the progression of life.

Liquid Poetess : )
Comment By: FreeEmily on June 16, 2005 01:56:45 AM Report
holy mess! that is awesome! LOL 17 years ago you were becoming YOU! a great writer... that poem was very well written. i am glad you're finding old poems. it is fun to look back and be taken away by the memories. :)
*em
Comment By: Freepainandlove on June 15, 2005 11:40:12 PM Report
Wow!! You were a great writer even back then!! This I can relate to so much words can not exspress it!!




 


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