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Author Name: FreeTRACYF 9 Comments
Date Added: June 22, 2005 23:06:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Walking Hand And Hand~

While sitting in the park,
watching the birds fly by.
I feel a gentle tranquil breeze,
causing me to sigh.

I spot an elderly couple,
walking hand and hand.
I think to myself that,
their love is grand.

Then I think of,
you and me.
And how our lives,
have turned out to be.

I get an image of us,
being old and gray.
Walking hand and hand in the park,
on a beautiful day.

I spy a young couple,
watching the elderly pair.
Dreaming of their own lives,
walking hand and hand without a care.

I look a little closer,
at the young couple.
I notice that it is Fletch and I,
when we were young and supple.

Author's Notes:

Love is like a tranquil breeze,
that sweeps over my soul.
Making my life whole.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKaren Marrah on November 2, 2005 07:15:40 PM Report
Just beautiful Tracy!! What a great write....Love, Karen
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on August 31, 2005 09:45:29 PM Report
Oh Tracy, what a peaceful write. Well penned. Love your little sister *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on June 26, 2005 02:49:42 PM Report
This is lovely and romantic, Tracy.
Samantha.
Comment By: FreeSmiley on June 25, 2005 05:45:18 AM Report
Love is a wonderful exchange of happiness and also sorrow but I get the feeling the you two will make it through anything that may come along
Wonderfuly done
Comment By: PremiumPaul on June 23, 2005 09:22:28 PM Report
Extremely nice - great expression I could really feel your thoughts
Paul
Comment By: PremiumJillian K. Alexis on June 23, 2005 08:52:54 PM Report
This is absolutely beautiful Sis. The love u have for my brother, is so evident, as is his for u. Love you both...your' big sister Jillian
Comment By: PremiumGlata on June 23, 2005 11:43:13 AM Report
Tracy, this is a beautiful glimpse into both the past and the future. The two of you have something wonderful! Hold tight and always share that love openly with one another. You never know what young couple might be watching you both for inspiration on how love should be.
Beautiful job, Sis!
Hugs! Glata
Comment By: FreeSavanahB on June 23, 2005 11:11:27 AM Report
How sweet, Tracy! I love the double loop back, as you guys are both the watched and the watching.... Too cool - Jude
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 23, 2005 10:30:40 AM Report
THIS IS SO VERY BEAUTIFUL..SO MUCH OF LIFE IS IN HOLDING HANDS.. LOVE THIS ~ SHE




 


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