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Author Name: Freewritelady 7 Comments
Date Added: June 24, 2005 22:06:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Souvenir
I swept the patio today, 
and while pulling weeds,
came upon a dirt encrusted
wedding band.
How long had it been there?
who threw it among the dandelions?
white clovers and earthworms?
It was a woman's ring;
Who had worn it
before letting it go?
This reminder of promises?
perhaps she still yearns for all the
memories stored within it's delicate designs.
I washed it off,  polished it.
A solid gold souvenier,
that withheld it's secrets,
and  had found the light of day again,
fitting my finger perfectly.
Author's Notes:
I really did find a wedding band one day when I went to get the mail..I wore it for years, and loved it well. Then, I had to pawn it, due to hard times, and sadly lost it. I hope whoever wound up with it cherrishes it as much as the original owner and myself...
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Comments:
Comment By: Freejag on June 27, 2005 08:13:50 PM Report
Super write my freind, good pace and excellent imagery to ponder...hmmmm who did it belong too why did they throw it away? Did they throw it away or lose it?
Comment By: FreeGlata on June 27, 2005 10:09:05 AM Report
I can imagine the mystery behind such a find and you've written it beautifully, Sis! This is a great, touching write...maybe one day you will re-locate that ring...I hope you can.
Beautiful way with words here hon...but then, I expect that from you!
Love you and looking forward to your summer visit!
Your hillbilly sister...
Glata
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 25, 2005 02:42:23 PM Report
Someone wept over losing that. It wound up in great hands though. Very nice Barbie, Joe
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 25, 2005 08:54:17 AM Report
WONDERFUL POEM LADY, THIS POEM DOES SOUNDS LIKE A MYSTRY UNFOLDS...GREAT~ SHE
Comment By: Freetom on June 24, 2005 10:49:22 PM Report
hugs beautiful poem hon
hugs kisses
tom
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on June 24, 2005 10:30:47 PM Report
Barbie, this is a wonderful story. Old things, being turned into something new again. *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeWilliamGoldenpen on June 24, 2005 10:13:20 PM Report
This is an excellent story. If only that wedding band could speak eh? Oh by the way...weeding...sweeping the patio...how are you at cutting grass?? ok, ok, just asking!! :-))

William.




 


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