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Author Name: PremiumPoetrydad1 9 Comments
Date Added: June 27, 2005 08:06:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Philosophy Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
TRUE TRANQUILITY

                                                                     

                              Most would like a tranquil life

                              No fears annoy, a lack of strife

                            Be careful friend for what you ask,

                           For more is gained in a labored task

 

                              Ever been on a mountain top?

                           Where views are grand; also stop

                          Next time enjoy… but look around;

                         How much is growing on the ground?

 

                            The growth occurs at a lower clime

                           Where life is challenged all the time.

                          The strength is tried by work and fire

                                The one thing they can’t do, is retire.

 

                          The body thrives on wholesome toil

                     Without it, muscle, brain and skill will spoil

                         So friends, practice; apply your ability

                            For in it you’ll find…true tranquility.

                                                                                                                


 

 Bruce A. Peaslee

©June, 2005

                                                                     

                                                                   

 

Author's Notes:
It has been a while since I last wrote, life has a bad habit of getting in the way of the way of more enjoyable pursuits
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJosiah on March 6, 2006 01:32:12 AM Report
Well-written. It reminds me of something Frank Herbert would have said.
Mentat
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on October 1, 2005 10:02:13 PM Report
Oh Bruce, i must agree with you...my life has been and continues to be very trying..but i also know it has made me stronger and given me the opportunity to relate to others pain. Ahh yes, how much i long for tranquility at times...but i probably wouldn't be here if life was so serene...of what would i possibly write? Naptimes?..lol

Great thoughts, words and enjoyable read. ~ Cindy
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 6, 2005 06:31:57 AM Report
Not only a good poem but also filled with good old fashioned wisdom. Right up my street!
ASW
Comment By: Freehiddendragon on July 18, 2005 08:03:32 AM Report
Oh, I loved this one Bruce.

I fully agree with this statement.

And it is said with such beautiful imagery and metaphor.

Very enjoyable and wise.

Dragon~
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 17, 2005 12:58:51 PM Report
This is incredible so enjoyable to read your words captivating loved this read
excellent
Cathy
Comment By: FreeKimber Turpin on July 9, 2005 02:47:59 AM Report
Beautifully written as always! Your time away from writing has not been tarnished one bit! This is thought provoking and inspiring.
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on July 1, 2005 05:01:02 PM Report
A very, very profound and philosophical write Bruce...
Brilliant!!

Sharon JJ
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on June 30, 2005 08:46:57 PM Report
Right on, Bruce. I love it. ML
Comment By: PremiumGlata on June 29, 2005 09:50:26 AM Report
A fantastic comeback to writing! Bruce, this is SO true and it's destined for my favs!
Hugs to ya and glad to see you writing again!
Glata




 


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