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Author Name: PremiumPoetrydad1 6 Comments
Date Added: July 13, 2005 09:07:41 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Humor Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
I'm Beat ! -a Rictameter-

I'm Beat !

I worked all night

Twelve hours is a long shift

Not much time for personal stuff

But the money sure helps keep the bills paid

Coming home to a happy wife,

Makes it all seem worthwhile

A bath, then bed,

I'M BEAT !!


Bruce A. Peaslee

© July 2005

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Comments:
Comment By: Freeaaron payne on April 2, 2006 03:02:40 PM Report
i've been here! -ap
Comment By: FreeTodd on October 6, 2005 07:26:46 AM Report
Boy do I know this feeling and her mood really can make all the difference. Excellent testimony to reality.
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 21, 2005 11:31:54 AM Report
You know? Its not necessarily the hours we work...its the thought or knowlege we have someone to come home to, that gives us the reason and the energy to go on..
great writing Bruce,
Ali x
Comment By: FreePoetic Soldier on July 20, 2005 08:31:58 AM Report
Well as long as you come home to a happy wife ah Bruce, good poem I liked reading this one.

Poetic Soldier
Comment By: FreeJennifer on July 14, 2005 01:40:19 PM Report
This is good also! I am glad you took to this poetic form, I feel honered!
Jen
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 13, 2005 09:56:33 AM Report
Hi Bruce! Good to see a new post from you, my friend! Also good to see that you are back in the work force and having the bill-paying stress load relieved!
Sending hugs, and a few smiles for this cute write...
Glata




 


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