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Author Name: FreeSerenity 17 Comments
Date Added: July 26, 2005 12:07:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Take Me Away

"All aboard", said the conductor,

As I stepped onto the train.

"But there is no one here",

I said, as I dry off from the wet cold rain.

"This is your imagination,

Tell me where you want to go.

There's no limit, no boundary.

Let your thoughts lead and I will follow."

"Take me away, to a place unknown.

A place so extraordinary, so rare,

That no man has laid eyes upon.

Take me out of this nightmare."

And as the train began to rise,

I stared out in wonder.

Flying through the clouds,

So white and tender.

"Take me to a place where magic lives.

Where fairytales become a reality,

And mythical creatures roam the lands.

A place with indescribable beauty."

"No need for a wishing well or fairy dust,

For this is my one and only desire.

To let my heart and soul go free.

Flying through the sky, higher and higher."

"And for my mind...

Well it's already in another world.

Funny how it works, don't you think?",

I giggled as the train twirled.

"A place where the grass is green,

On every side of the meadow.

From sunrise to sunset,

I will lay and wait for the stars to glow."

"If only I can reach out and touch them.

I would light up the night for everyone,

Who has been overcome by darkness.

Till a new day comes, and the sun shines so golden."

Sunlight shined brightly through the window.

"This is the last stop", said the conductor.

"See you tomorrow", I smiled,

Stepping out into the busy streets in laughter.

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Comment By: FreeAndrew on January 6, 2010 03:14:33 PM Report
that's one helluva train ride - where do i board?  easy to understand this winning you an award - it's wonderful
Comment By: FreeKarl Berry on April 10, 2006 02:18:27 PM Report
I am stuck at the way you write, very beautyful work!.....Patch.....!~
Comment By: FreeVictoria on October 7, 2005 03:34:26 PM Report
Very creative! Bravo!
Comment By: Freeit's a secret on August 14, 2005 02:03:35 PM Report
this is just an amazing piece of work.
my cary did it again! u got another award, CONGRATULATIONS!
Comment By: FreeSandy J Hradil on August 13, 2005 12:19:42 AM Report
Congrats on your award!!! This poem is amazing and you really deserve the honor!!!
Comment By: FreeSiDra on August 6, 2005 12:00:01 AM Report
wow...this is so beautiful...well deserving of an award...CONGRATS!

Comment By: FreeWith pain comes strength on August 5, 2005 05:53:26 PM Report
This is excellent...
Well worthy of an award ;-D
Comment By: FreeBrittanie on August 4, 2005 09:09:59 PM Report
wow....speechless. an amazing write.
Comment By: FreeCathy on August 2, 2005 11:25:13 AM Report
Such a delight to read so very enjobable loved it excellent job
Congratulations on your award you so deserved it
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on August 2, 2005 10:29:47 AM Report
Congrats on your award for a very wonderful write.
Comment By: Freemilana on August 2, 2005 02:04:05 AM Report
my goodnessssssss!!! lol... u and ur awards... 3 already... im so proud of my little girl lol... congrats *big hug* =))))))
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 1, 2005 11:46:11 PM Report
Congratulations on winning the award
for this charming write.
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on August 1, 2005 07:08:01 AM Report
I like this very much. It's awesome. Congratulations on the award.
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on August 1, 2005 12:45:14 AM Report
Congratulations on the award. A wonderful write.
Gentle Dove
Comment By: FreeScarlett. on July 31, 2005 01:04:06 PM Report
beautiful and lovley great write it a fav for me

Comment By: FreexXxCaution, Hazardous to selfxXx on July 29, 2005 04:54:01 PM Report
aawwww...great job. Very creative and fulfilled my sense and imagination. this is BEAUTIFUL! and deserves a award for creativety no doubt.

much love,
Comment By: Freeunsung hero on July 26, 2005 03:20:26 PM Report
The imagination of a dreamer who dreams of a better world, not just for herself but for everyone as a whole. Very creative work here sweety. My mother would love that picture with the lighthouse lol of course, u knew that. Great job. =)


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