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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 52 Comments
Date Added: August 13, 2005 09:08:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~*Garden Of the Gods*~

 ~* Garden Of the Gods*

I had  found the  secret  garden of the Gods, 
with its splashing exotic ambrosia waterfalls,
dancing out of the scented naked  air in
this emerald oasis  of unforgetable  crystal vista

It was splashing its breathtaking cascade
diamond showers ,on chocolate colored rocks
as it caressed  this flowing  magicial  place


Tropical  painted wild lilacs and white swift 
egrets  that fly in the vibrant  tropical  garden,
days of mystical luster with silken  butterflies
 that flutters in the  mornings  scented  breeze

 

Water lilies  with  painted  hues float in
deep colors of azure blues  and floral 
fragrance  that breaths in the softness
of passion flowers of splender
 Tall green grasses  bend to the dance of a
gentle teasing  breeze  and lovely botanicals
that awaken to morning lights golden  bliss 

 This leaves a tender sun kissed tint with a
dreamy  bouquet of pink and white mimosa flowers ,
and with  an  angelic musk that lingers in the breath
 of  a hypnotic  unforgetable day

Softly the fingers of night ribbons  reach
into the fire of  scarlet  sunset and its  jeweled
treasures 

It's golden  alluring sultry temptress
 with sheer silk night veils,  that try to cover
the blushing night under the seduction  of the
midnight sun


 

 

Author's Notes:

Here is a poem that I wrote  after the lovely lady Margaret (Baglady) gave me these's words
to build a poem..
I hope this pleases our master lady poet with her golden pen that we all love

Here are the words she gave me

waterfall
oasis
chocolate 
grasses
azure 
secret
ribbons
lilies
ambrosia
swift
fire 
treasure 
glowing
 golden
egret


Much love to you lady for this honor...
 Your friend , India ~ She

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on April 22, 2011 12:54:41 PM Report


 i too was given a word challenge congrats on the award


love all your work


 


 


Comment By: FreeSteve on January 31, 2011 01:14:59 PM Report
Congratulations on the award.  How did I miss such a wonderfull write?  You done a good job on this.   
Comment By: FreeAndrew on January 29, 2010 09:37:41 AM Report
Can't say I have ever seen a work on this site to attract so many comments - I am in awe.  It's also very easy to undertand why this award was presented to you - you EARNED it.  It's not like your skill in painting vivid pictures through your words isn't enough - you go and frame it around a word bank!  simply amazing. 
Comment By: FreeAutumn E. on November 12, 2008 07:33:41 PM Report
I want to go there.  You are a truly gifted.  This poem flows like a waterfall.  Very nicely done. 

~Autumn

Comment By: Freewarwick ross on October 1, 2008 02:52:46 PM Report
What an excellent piece of literature, a poem for poets and people alike.

 

Other than the words you were given there are many other great expressions in here that conjure up great though and image, and it has been so well sown together its reads like silk.

Comment By: Freeobohwemu o. kennedy on September 2, 2008 08:41:56 AM Report
Now wasn't this deserving of the award or what?

TWO THUMPS UP!

Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on August 18, 2008 07:47:01 AM Report
I think this is a very well structured poem with good images built by sensual metaphors.

 

Nice work. 

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on July 1, 2007 02:05:14 PM Report
absolutely breathtaking, well done on the award, bravo on your beautiful work,

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on October 28, 2006 02:02:00 PM Report
Truly beautiful and very well worthy of award!
Comment By: FreeLukeofHomelandSecurity on May 28, 2006 10:39:20 PM Report
The way each line ties into the next is fantastic.
You truly deserve this one.
...After reading the second stanza I got a hankering for chocolate.

:)

Luke

P.S. What A list you have!! Over 2000 poems!


Comment By: FreeWilliam R. Sullens on January 29, 2006 02:54:53 AM Report
Hi Velvet:
A fine display of your creative art and your ability to take the challenge of Lady Margaret and come up with another beauty. A poem, well done! Thanks Silver Bill
Comment By: Freeobohwemu o. kennedy on December 20, 2005 08:40:16 AM Report
you used the words quite well!lovely write!
Comment By: FreeKalke on October 15, 2005 12:53:10 AM Report
nice name......

nice lyrix......

may the spirits of the Gods watch over you with their many eyes that exist in the celestial skies......

you are spiritual yes?

love, peace & TRUTH

kal-k

The 3rd Side of a Coin.....
Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on October 6, 2005 05:23:59 AM Report
THis is a very vivid painting India, something of a Monet with its brilliant colours and natural setting, apicture of the garden of Eden complete with innocent sexual allure!)

It reminds me somewhat of Coleridge's Graet Poem:-

In Xanadu did Kubla Khan
A stately pleasure-dome decree :
Where Alph, the sacred river, ran
Through caverns measureless to man

Down to a sunless sea.

So twice five miles of fertile ground
With walls and towers were girdled round :
And there were gardens bright with sinuous rills,
Where blossomed many an incense-bearing tree ;
And here were forests ancient as the hills,
Enfolding sunny spots of greenery.
But oh ! that deep romantic chasm which slanted
Down the green hill athwart a cedarn cover !
A savage place ! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover !
And from this chasm, with ceaseless turmoil seething,
As if this earth in fast thick pants were breathing,
A mighty fountain momently was forced :
Amid whose swift half-intermitted burst
Huge fragments vaulted like rebounding hail,
Or chaffy grain beneath the thresher's flail :
And 'mid these dancing rocks at once and ever
It flung up momently the sacred river.
Five miles meandering with a mazy motion
Through wood and dale the sacred river ran,
Then reached the caverns measureless to man,
And sank in tumult to a lifeless ocean :
And 'mid this tumult Kubla heard from far
Ancestral voices prophesying war !


The shadow of the dome of pleasure
Floated midway on the waves ;
Where was heard the mingled measure
From the fountain and the caves.

It was a miracle of rare device,
A sunny pleasure-dome with caves of ice !
A damsel with a dulcimer
In a vision once I saw :
It was an Abyssinian maid,
And on her dulcimer she played,
Singing of Mount Abora.
Could I revive within me
Her symphony and song,
To such a deep delight 'twould win me,

That with music loud and long,
I would build that dome in air,
That sunny dome ! those caves of ice !
And all who heard should see them there,
And all should cry, Beware ! Beware !
His flashing eyes, his floating hair !
Weave a circle round him thrice,
And close your eyes with holy dread,
For he on honey-dew hath fed,
And drunk the milk of Paradise.



Warm Wishes

David

Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on September 17, 2005 12:21:05 PM Report
I don't know how I missed this....you've done fine justice to the words given. This is a truly fantastic write that contains all the characteristics of your work India. Congratulations on this well-deserved award my friend. I'm so happy for you.

Sharon JJ
Comment By: FreeJENNIFER HOBBS on September 7, 2005 01:44:08 PM Report
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL! INDIA....LOVED IT....HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH SUCH WONDERFUL STUFF...CONGRATULATIONS....:)
Comment By: FreeCathy on August 29, 2005 11:39:29 AM Report
loved it even more the second time I read this CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AWARD you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DESERVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WAY TO GO INDIA HIP HIP HORRAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cathy
Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on August 29, 2005 10:20:29 AM Report
Very very beautiful. Congratulations
Shanna M.
Comment By: FreeRonald Hamilton on August 26, 2005 11:42:32 PM Report
just wanted to add my comment to this great poem..love ya and beautiful job
Ron
Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 26, 2005 12:31:05 PM Report
India, this was beautiful; a masterpiece only you could create! Congrats on the award Hon...it deserves one in every color!!!!Barbie
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on August 25, 2005 11:07:42 AM Report
This will be the first of many for you. Congrats again!
Comment By: on August 25, 2005 09:44:26 AM Report
Hahahaha...Congradulations INDIA on winning your Award...nice piece...
Bob
Comment By: FreeLady Literary on August 24, 2005 11:06:00 PM Report
This was an absolute delight to read! How clever and vivid and..well.....you get the idea. Great job and congratulations on winning an award very much earned.
Lisa
Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on August 24, 2005 10:07:33 PM Report
Congatulations on winning the Featured Poem Award. I loved this the first time I read it it is so deserving of this award.
Love..................Tracy
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on August 24, 2005 11:32:31 AM Report
I commented below and now I also say congrats on the award India, it is well deserved, Joe
Comment By: FreeKaren Lowrey on August 24, 2005 10:07:07 AM Report
What a beautiful job you did with the words that Margaret presented to you. I can see and picture the garden you described.

Congratulations on the beauty of your "Garden of the Gods,” and the blue ribbon that you earned totally recognizes the beauty within your imagery of the "Garden of the Gods."
Comment By: Freehiddendragon on August 24, 2005 09:09:54 AM Report
Congratulations India...this award could not go to a more deserving poem Lady...glorious it is....takes the breath away~

Best wishes,
Dragon~
Comment By: Freematthew critchley on August 24, 2005 06:43:31 AM Report
I love all your poetry but this is impeccable, outstanding,inspiring and an absolute pleasure to read
Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on August 23, 2005 10:12:15 PM Report
Excellently done my friend..! You have penned a beautiful piece of poetry..! And i can see why you got the award..! Simply magnificent my friend..!
Comment By: FreeNiomi on August 23, 2005 07:13:48 PM Report
Well Done She and congratulations what a beautiful poem, This just goes to show how talented you are, as the words that baglady choose wasn't the easiest to work with yet you pulled it off magically. Keep on moving me.
Niomi.D
Comment By: Freepainandlove on August 23, 2005 06:58:07 PM Report
No wonder this won an award!! It is brilantly put together. You did a great job using those words!!
Comment By: FreeBOB on August 23, 2005 05:46:04 PM Report
wonderful,wonderful, at last, the gift of poetry that you have, has been recognised:)
lovely piece of writing She, congrats on your award, Bob :)
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 23, 2005 05:26:37 PM Report
Dearest India*~
I feel so overwhelmingly pleased that you won the Featured Poem Award, as your most gracious and beautiful poetry should win so many times~! As I stated when I first got to read this WB write, I was instantly dazzled by your imagination in being able to place those words into the perfect sentences, into great lines, and into a fabulous post~!! You are such a loving and 'all-seeing' person, India, and the wealth comes out in your portfolio of works~ I am so happy for you~!! Here's to MORE of these Award Medallions coming your way~!!
______May you bask in Love and Light_____
Margaret, your Sister in Spirit
Comment By: FreeWilliamGoldenpen on August 23, 2005 05:19:55 PM Report
This is such a well deserved award Kitten. You have written an exemplary poem here, which reflect the excellent poet that you are and are a shining example to all of us. Congratulation My Darling, well done.

Always Yours,

William.
Comment By: on August 23, 2005 04:59:36 PM Report
Dear India~
I am in awe! Such a fantastic thought out,penned write..
Pleasing to read and to feel overpowered by a sense of warmth from your write,makes one's heart feel lightened.
Margaret gave you a beautiful list of words that you transformed into a heavenly write :)
Congratulations!!
Hugs,
Tracie~
Comment By: FreeJeff on August 23, 2005 03:53:59 PM Report
Well it's about time that one of this sites most gifted writers get reconized.
Congratulations!

Jeff
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 23, 2005 03:01:09 PM Report
wonderful work my friend Congrats you deserve it Ali xxx
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 23, 2005 02:32:14 PM Report
When I read this the first time I knew it was
a beauty. I am thrilled that the judges recognized
that fact and awarded it the gold. Congratulations
dear on the well deserved award.
Linda
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on August 23, 2005 01:54:24 PM Report
VELVET RAVEN ....... INDIA
YOUR GIFT OF EXPRESSION IS BEYOND BEAUTIFUL!
MARGRARETS WORDS COME ALIVE THRU YOUR SPIRIT!
WELL DESERVED FEATURED POEM AWARD!
WITH LOVE TO YOU MY FRIEND .....BLUE WOLF....FLETCH

Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on August 23, 2005 01:33:40 PM Report
This is beautiful. Congratulations on your award.
Samantha.
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 16, 2005 12:51:04 PM Report

OHHHHhhhh....BEAUTIFUL~!!
SPECTACULAR WORK~!

Dear, dear INDIA.....How pretty this write is~!! The visuals in this are just GREAT~!! Your storyline is like a wonderful fantasy dream~ Wow, the use of those words you have done SO GREAT~! I am proud of you, and proud that you have gifted me and the Site with such a great poem~....THANKS a million butterflies~!
Love......Margaret.....
(Still working upon your word bank to me)
Comment By: PremiumCharles C. Griggs on August 15, 2005 09:42:25 AM Report
You have a gift with words- this is outstanding work- Charles C. Griggs
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 13, 2005 11:17:36 PM Report
India, you did an amazing job with the
word bank Margaret provided. The words suit your
writing style to a T. The poem is beautiful and
perfectly enchanting. The imagery is splendid
and your wording in this poem is the best.
Linda
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on August 13, 2005 09:07:08 PM Report
India this is a well written poem. I think that Margaret knew the right person to call on when she asked you to use those words to write the poem.
Damon
Comment By: FreeH. Louise on August 13, 2005 05:34:06 PM Report
Wow. This is so descriptive, that it would paint a picture in anyone's mind. It was such an amazing read. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work
xHannahx
Comment By: FreeCathy on August 13, 2005 05:10:15 PM Report
WOW WOW I APPLAUD YOU THIS IS BREATHTAKING AND SO VERY VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL. the imagery is so perfect your words so captivating and elegant I am in awe!!!!! This is definately going in my favorites, loved it A breathtaking beyond perfect heavenly poem
Cathy
Comment By: Freegrneyedbtch on August 13, 2005 03:49:58 PM Report
wow.
this is truly beautiful!!
love it, india!!
keep'em coming- your writing is wonderful.
-livi
Comment By: Freesteve on August 13, 2005 01:27:11 PM Report
To write like this is an amazing talent. Truly wonderful to read. Margaret will be proud. Beautiful.

Your friend Steve
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on August 13, 2005 01:16:53 PM Report
I feel as if I was there after reading this India, incredible write. I love the word bank poems, Joe
Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on August 13, 2005 12:45:05 PM Report
What a beautifully painted picture. Margaret will absolutely love it, I am sure.
Love..............Tracy
Comment By: Freehiddendragon on August 13, 2005 11:19:16 AM Report
This is simply MAGICAL dear Lady!

My goodness! What a glorious write!

Margaret will love this...Truly a beauty!

Best wishes,
Velvet Dragon~
Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on August 13, 2005 10:43:00 AM Report
What a lovely picture u have colorfully penned Lady. I'm sure u made Margaret proud...Hugz...Jillian




 


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