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Author Name: FreeWind Whisperer 3 Comments
Date Added: August 21, 2005 10:08:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Living Dead (Pt.2)

As I struggle to get back up on my feet,
I see a shadow quickly fly past me.

"Who's there?"

Dead silence.

*+*

The rain starts to drip onto my face,
I huddle in the corner,
I see eyes peering at me
from the darkness.

*+*

The rain starts to downpour,
my eyes are covered with my drenched hair,
I feel hot breath on one side
of my neck,
then....
I feel skin being torn away
from my body.

*+*

I scream out in agony,
but there's nobody around
to hear my mournful cries.

*+*

I look up and there must be
a dozen or so vampires surrounding me.

*+*

What did I do to deserve this?

*+*

The ground soaks with my blood,
the rain carries it down the
small slope in the alleyway.

*+*

It must have been their voices
I heard in the dead of darkness.

*+*

They stand over me
waiting for me to cross over
to their world....
the world of the living dead.

*+*

I could feel my body
being changed from human,
to being an immortal.

*+*

I was the thirst for their hunger,
they hunted me down
and turned me into one of them....
one of the living dead.

*+*

Apr.26/2004

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 21, 2005 09:15:40 PM Report
Goodness, this was scary as hell. The part
about torn flesh and blood spilling down the
incline to the alley way is very vivid imagery.
Nice job whih this spooky wtite.
Linda
Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on August 21, 2005 05:01:59 PM Report
This is really good sis. I won't sleep a wink tonight. I need my Mommy...LOL. Very well penned...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: Freetom on August 21, 2005 12:55:36 PM Report
good story nice write
hugs kisses
tom




 


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