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Author Name: Freewritelady 5 Comments
Date Added: September 10, 2005 10:09:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Beached (WB for Fletch)

I had smelled it before, but so long ago.

Had been there too, but not in this life.

The salted air, a memory jolt.

A younger me, brought to life through my nose.

There was no spray on my face,

and yet I tasted it.

Walking upon the sand,

granulated heat upon my soulís traveling shoes.

While seagulls screeched alarm,

So many shores away...

So many waves I had ridden since then..

And so many more I would be riding.

This nasal assault, a tube of time travel,

a young girl, a different path I walked then.

wanting now, to curl up into this memory

of† perfect comfort....

Author's Notes:
Thanks for the word list Fletch!!! These are fun, and a good way to get the old noodle in gear, thanks again.

perfect, walking, nose, curl, rising, spray, sand, shore, tube, waves...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on December 29, 2007 04:59:11 AM Report

Your talent is amamzing. This poem is proof of that.
EXCELLENT.
To my favs. Thanks
Fletch


Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on October 10, 2005 09:12:40 AM Report
Barbie- You did admirably well here. The poem spoke volumes while allowing one to forget that it is a word bank poem. Will have to try one sometime.

---Poetrydad---
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 12, 2005 06:13:16 PM Report
WOWOWOWOWOW...this is awesome girlfriend. What a trip back in time...I'm giving you a high five for this one!

*****

~Barbara~ *loving this poem*
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 12, 2005 06:08:40 PM Report
Very well done, Barbie~!! These little WBs are just as you described, good for your brain exercise~ This write is very descriptive, bringing the reader shoreside, and feeling the salt spray~!
Good job...
Margaret.....
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 10, 2005 10:45:40 AM Report
WOW.. YOU OUT DID YOUR SELF HER WITH THIS POEM HE WILL LOVE THIS..GREAT POEM LADY BIG HUGS ~ SHE




 


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