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Author Name: Free1000blueroses 5 Comments
Date Added: September 21, 2005 22:09:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A girl inside of me

There's a girl inside of me no one sees

But I'll show you to her

Yes,I'll give you the keys

I've never shown her to anyone

I've never let her out

But now you'll see what I'm really all about

She cries when she's sad

Loves with she's got

She yells when she's mad

Never pretending to be something she's not

Yes,she shows you who she is,

What she's all about

I guess i've always been afraid to let her out

She doesn't care what you think,

She's the real deal

She's not afraid to show how she really feels

What's really scary is that's who I am supposed to be

I guess I have trouble showing the real me....

Author's Notes:

I wrote this because alot of the time I feel like I'm hiding who I really am and people don't see the "real me",that it's locked up somewhere and I'm afraid to let it out.

 Let me know what you think. 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on July 8, 2007 05:20:36 PM Report
it not easy to show the vulnerable sides of ourselves as you have within this beautiful write
nicely done
Micky :>D

Comment By: FreeRin Marie on July 6, 2007 02:58:03 PM Report
I really like this.  Someday you with be comfortable enough with yourself to be he girl inside.

 

Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeS on April 27, 2007 12:48:03 PM Report
so theres a ms hyde inside you?

 

Comment By: FreeStrongerNow on September 22, 2005 07:30:05 AM Report
This makes a lot of sense to me and I think it is beatifully written.
LiseH
Comment By: FreeJames.A on September 22, 2005 01:28:46 AM Report
a lovely write....




 


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