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Author Name: FreehiddensmileCML 1 Comments
Date Added: September 29, 2005 21:09:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Who Said?~
Who is it,
that choses between you and I?
Who is it,
that makes the choice that you leave,
and not me?
~
Who said you had to go?
Not I.
Not I.
Who said it was the end?
Not you.
Not you.
~
Why my dear friend,
did you have to leave?
I cannot make it,
without you loving touch.
~
Why my dear friend,
did you leave me all alone?
I cannot make it without you.
~
Who was it,
that made the choice between you and I?
I only with that they chose me,
instead of you.
~
You had so much going for you,
I had so little.
You had a family,
I had myself.
~
Why did you to be the chosen one?
It should have been me.
Author's Notes:
This is about a friend who died from CF. I wished that it was me and not her. She died when we were 6, I am now 17. I guess I never really dealt with it, but her death date is next week, and it is just hurting me. I wish that it was me who got sick and not her.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freecarrie packard on May 7, 2008 07:21:23 AM Report
Dear broken heart    live for her  be happy  be healthy  do good and she will be proud of you

God has a plan  don't dispair you are in it  he hasn't forgotten you  There are still things he wants you to do  try and you will  see life is worth living   also know that I am here for you if you need a friend





 


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