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Author Name: FreeGaia 4 Comments
Date Added: October 11, 2005 13:10:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Nobody

Iím not smart

And Iím not strong,

I donít have perfect vocabulary

Iíll never have a perfect body

I was never picked first

Nor second or third

But always last

I never had a talent

Or a friend to look up to

I was never loved

And I never felt happy

I felt bruised and beaten

After the school bell

I donít feel much emotion

Just pain and corruption

Life was so cruel

And this was my fate

†††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††† Iím just the child

††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††† You would call nobody,

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Just thought of this now..please comment on my work :)

Be appreciated

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMeg on January 19, 2006 01:50:54 PM Report
The simplicity of your words belies the complexity of the emotions behind them, and that is indeed talent. Well-done, much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing :)
XOXO Cheerios XOXO
Meg
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on October 15, 2005 08:35:20 PM Report
oooh ouch. This one hurts a bit, but is a commentary true of many young thinkers....*sigh*
How quickly we forget the pains of growing, the confusion of learning, and the ache in knowing.
I loved your expression here. Keep the good stuff coming. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 12, 2005 09:45:19 AM Report
RYAN, THIS POEM IS WITH GREAT FEELINGS..SO MANY THINK THEY ARE NOBODY.. BUT WE ALL ARE..GREAT POEM.. ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeKeri on October 11, 2005 01:47:28 PM Report
Actually, I think I'm going to fav this one. This has been my life for so long...until I broke out of highschool and found that I was somebody. It's a sad life to live.

Good write.

Keri




 


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